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Kapitel 4: rewrite

I'm rewriting this whole story here are my 3 reasons.

1. Ive been having trouble writing the chapters for over another so I decided to rewrite the book.

2. Recent COI and Shadow Slave events gave me an idea for what I want to do in the future and it allows me to have some inspiration that wouldn't fit into what I would want later.

3. I've gotten annoyed by some readers who kept complaining about how I was doing the MC power system. I want a reasonable overpowered character. Beyonders are just a complete dimension away from what sleepers are who can only get stronger by saturating their Cores or forming a new one where from the start, depending on the pathway, beyonders are fundamentally built different especially once they reached sequence 6-7 where most if not all pathways change the person greatly. Then there's the whole Flaw, I won't give the MC a Flaw as Spoiler, he isn't a resident of the world of Shadow slave so an absolute law about flaws don't affect him much.


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