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Second Chance in Danmachi
4.54 (19 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
Walking home, -like I do every day-, was boring as usual...
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That was until a gambling-crazed God shot me in the head with an sniper rifle from the sky and spun a wheel to decide my fate.... yeah that was a crazy time.
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I have basic experience in writing so it shouldn't be a massive shit show... just a minor one. Do tell if I make some grammar mistakes and I will fix them when I look through the comments.
Small-Harem tag means 2 people and at MAX 3 as romantic interests, I have some ideas but feel free to throw some in as well.
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Mc is dumb, it's like author tries to nerf him because he is too op so he makes him a fucking idiot. Why did he wait so long to enter a familia and didn't get falna (or excelia) so when he kills he would get xp ? Grammar is a mess imo. Annoying but readable so I have complicated emotions about that. Definitely not good but it's not mtl level, more like edited mtl level grammar.
story is great with a cool concept that I haven't seen before. there's also some actual depth to the characters that make them feel more realistic.
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Grammar is good...idea and concept of the story as well is amazing and the Personality of the MC is good..not arrogant but also not a pushover... good job and keep it up author-san
It’s a great start..... Although, I haven’t got past 1 chapter but I have huge expectations for this fanfic so I’m hoping you don’t give up. It was really a good start ngl and actually way better than most fanfic. Hope you update more though.🙏🏾 Also to note: Can anyone tell me if there’s any mc that reincarnated in Danmachi and get strong without any help either from system or plot armour? Also he’s not a beta and doesn’t think with his dick. He’s a fighter so he’s not necessarily a mage. It’ll be awesome if you lot found out there is one and tell me what is it called.
You said your update schedules gonna be trash but at least your book is the opposite plz more chapters Also I think Sanjouno Haruhim is a perfect candidate for the Harem Because she can boost his level and is a fox girl
Good Job, excited to see more!Good Job, excited to see more!Good Job, excited to see more!Good Job, excited to see more!Good Job, excited to see more!
could have been a great novel what a disappointment .............................................................................................,...........................................................................................
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Finally a fanfic with a Fanalis, one of my favorite races anime, as the MC. This fanfic also have long chapters. Worth a read. is gooooooooooooooooooooooood
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One of the few fanfics im eager to read further And the author genuinely puts in effort with chapters around 4000 words long I cant ask for more
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Great novel keep up the great work.......................................................................................................................................................................
This i really good and deserves more powerstones but I recommend that you wait for awhile before you read because you will stress out the author if you keep begging for chapters