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Zusammenfassung
"I was surrounded, point to die
when I heard a voice. "
my first time writing and my native language is not English so I will be open to criticism.
I have no right to any of the HOTD characters
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The story is good so far man.........but your using the wrong words.."sounds of craving", or "detour " your phrasing them wrong.........................