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RIZE - ver1.0

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Autor: Adwit_ojha

4.57 (12 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

The moment is here. The game that everyone was awaiting. RIZE. The world's first live reality video game.Players all around the world had been waiting for its release. Quite matter-of-factly. Like I did for minecraft.

But a secret alteration in its code sends a shockwave around the world converting every non-player into "characters" or "tributes".

Will an unknown, ambitious hobbyist, Alex, be able to put together the code in this hellish delusional world and revert it to the way it had been ?
Devastated by the death of his dear friends, Alex seeks revenge. He would do anything to kill the man who did it.
But will the shedding of so much blood have any great impact ? Is that kind of a human Alex is ?
Is he so ruthless?
Read the goddamn story to find it.

NOTE: READERS, PLEASE READ THE FIRST FIVE CHAPTER BEFORE JUDGING. THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS MAY SEEM BORING, BUT ARE NECESSARY FOR MC INTRODUCTION AND DO READ THE PROLOGUE, ITS SHORT

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  1. Adwit_ojha
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  2. ANUPAM_DIXIT
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4.57

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  • Geschichtenentwicklung
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Adwit_ojha

Hello dear readers, Author here. If you enjoy reading my work, please do comment and write a review about it. Please point out any mistakes. It would help me a lot to improvise myself. If my work brings a little refreshment to you, that would make me content

6mth
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ManInASuit231

I gotta tell you man, the concept of leveling down is novel. Never heard of it. First time got to see it. No bonus rewards from system, oh i like it so much. Keep posting im gonna give you stones power ones

6mth
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TimidTux

The First Book I’ve actually read through fully, I love where it’s going and think it’s a decently unique take, definitely adding to my collection and will be following this story. Of course I had to give 5 stars for a first review 🔥🙌🏻

6mth
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ANUPAM_DIXIT

this is so fantastic,every thing in this nowel is just perfect and mind-blowing

6mth
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OldestDream1805

I like the way your story is pacing, its the first ever fantasy one I have read which provides you with the reason of "another world". Looking forward for your next chapters!!

6mth
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Coolguy

Despite being the same VR game genre we see a lot here, the ideas in the novel are unique especially the ability of level down and people trapped in the game with no exit. It's early so not much to say about the character development and the world design but what has been shown till now is very interesting. The MC does get a unique skill. The initial fights were simple as many abilities and other perks have not been unfolded yet. The inner dialogues of mc, few talks with fellow players are hinting at good character development. The dialogues are also novel giving a different taste. The emotions of his dead friend and their revenge driving mc gives inkling of many fights in the future. Hope the novel becomes more interesting.

5mth
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Starless00

The novel is good and a somewhat innovative idea that you can try, especially for the virtual reality eraser Although the story contains some strange details I think that this will be clarified as the story progresses

5mth
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shreshth_chaurasia

Well the story is great. I found the cover to be good and I liked the development. Though I would like you to change the names of the main character because it is not good. Also, idk how you are going to extend it to 3000 chapters because he story seems like it should be maximum 900 chapters, though that is for you to decide how to continue forward. Other than nthis though, it's fantastic.

5mth
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LordAizen4765

Ahem, review time !! I like the way your novel is pacing and the character design, the story's worth reading, gonna keep an eye for updates, i will be impressed when the world background gets more exciting, so im gonna go with

6mth
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TalesCreative

I really like how the turn of event going, it got a good paced to it. There still a lot room for development of character and I would like to see more of how the Mc deal with his upcoming problems

5mth
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DreamReaper

Writing Quality, Character Design, World Background. These 3 factors need improvement.

5mth
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WanderingShadow1

A good story indeed, the first humane story I've seen thus far XD.. Release more chaps!!

5mth
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