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Return of the demon

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Zusammenfassung

In the Grand War Long Tian killed the Devil Emperor but died alongside him when he self destructed.

Billions of years later Long Tian awakens to find that he had reincarnated. All of his friends and all of his enemies had all died. He was alone in an unfamiliar world.

Careful to not make the mistakes of the past, he vows to cultivate and return to the peak of cultivation once again.

But things may not progress as he desires. For as he awakes, so does the darkness.


PS: To all those who came here because the name says demon, the MC isn't really a demonic type. The name is pretty much unrelated to the MC, and isn't explained until much later.

The first seven chapters are world building, and an explanation of MC reincarnating. The story only starts from chapter eight onward. So please read ten chapters before giving it a grade.
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Important links

Cultivation stage

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ulZE0tUzFzbLaYuCClUzmHLyfv15rzey/view?usp=sharing

https://tinyurl.com/yxw4c8kd


Map

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1CVac5-aHyO7N8a1geOVJZSJQo5_pqPJ8/view?usp=sharing

https://tinyurl.com/y3hanccc

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Also if anyone would be a dear and help me set up a proper book cover, it would be much appreciated.

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    Idontknowwhattosay

    This is the Author. I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel and giving me feedback. I hope t continue to write a story that you would certainly enjoy.

    4yr
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    anon88

    This is a review of the first fifteen chapters. The author has demonstrated mastery of both technical and descriptive skills. The author has interwoven cultivating methods and setting while forwarding the plot. This work doesn’t feel like you are reading a cultivation manual in between plot chapters. The pacing between plot developments is excellent. The lacking point is that only the main character is fully realized after 15 chapters. The side characters seem 2 dimensional at this point. Recommend!

    5yr
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    seeker_wx

    The story is very well articulated - and the world building is quite comprehensive. I'm looking forward to rest of the story, and getting to know the characters better. @Author - thank you for your work!

    4yr
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    hormor1
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    thanks for the new update.............. very nice novel 😊😊😊😊 ❤❤❤❤❤ 💖💖💖💖💖💖 🙌🙌🙌🙌 😍😍😍😍😍 😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍

    4yr
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    supreme_primordial

    This novel starts up as the typical cultivation novel but big up to the author for planning out his cultivation system plus the novel is a slow build up living less room for mistake in the story line

    4yr
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    supreme_primordial

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    4yr
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    V_20
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    Great story. It has great potential. The part I like the most is that the hero isnt all powerful and all knowing. He makes mistakes. Hopefully the stories continues with the given quality. Only thing that bothers me is the update frequency.

    4yr
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    1amlord

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    4yr
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    silverloon

    I really like the story. It also has lots of potential and is very interesting. Just need it to update more. I need more chapters. Gj author a very interesting plot

    5yr
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    Dra_HH

    This is a great novel. It has great character and world development. It is even very educational in some places. The only problem I have is the slow upload speed.

    3yr
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    Cvpro
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    The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.

    3yr
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    DgodRequiem

    This book just hits different and just is plain good. The writing quality is good and makes the story more interesting. The story development isn't like most stories on this site, which just barrel through everything but pays attention to detail and reminds me of some good Chinese cultivation novels. The characters in the novel have their own distinct personalities, and the MC does have character development even though it doesn't come across like that in the first chapters. The last and I think everything that makes the story more compiling is that the author took so much of his time to actual create everything needed to make his world better with cultivation realms, worlds and everything that makes me think other authors can also take lessons from him on how to make a story more detailed(Not badmouthing anyone), anyway thank you Author for creating such a masterpiece. Have a good one.

    3yr
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    Dra_HH

    Good Story. Need more update. update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.

    4yr
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    Daoist1rvBov

    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

    4yr
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