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In Alfan the world where the (un)fortunate protagonist of this story finds himself, are there at any point in time 5 living gods, if one should die a new one is added to the mix, thought the history of Alfan there have been many living gods in the world appearing as hero's, king's and queen's, master chef's, tyrants, or as completely unknown people.
join Mars as he sets out on a journey to explore Alfan to find out what kind of living god he wants to be.
as soon as he gets there that is.
Volume 2 going full steam ahead with 3 chapters a week!
chapters are more than 1500~ words.
Authors discord: https://discord.gg/uHVhX9m
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Impossible to read, no commas or capitalization. Author does not read his own work. So why should we? ........................................................................................
The book is good and it needs more ratings honestly it’s better than a lot of rated books"....."..........."......."................................
I love this even if it has some flaws, like how the creator doesn't natively speak English so it can be a little weird to get used to but overall it has a lot of very good elements to it.
Just not good, I got to chapter 4 and couldnt keep going. Some people will like it because of the comical aproach but this is not my thing. Stupid comedy is not my type of comedy when I am reading something. There are other problems but I will stop here since I only got to chapter 4. Maybe I will read it someday (hell no).
This story was bad main character was inconsistent and its personality the female harem was super Bland and you could tell that they were only there for wish fulfillment the other living God's where disappointments with the one with the bow just basically being his b**** and following all his orders with no will of his own the ending was so trash and didn't make any sense at all( how the hell can a living God defeat the very thing that created it) but the one thing that got on my nerves the most what's how every character in the story just put up with the main characters b******* and nobody ever gave him a piece of their mind the main character never gets any development man the story is bad this isn't even good to kill time. What makes all of this worse is that people are actually telling this author this is a good story without actually telling him any of his mistakes or asking him to improve will tall people trying to get into the story I'll just say this it's at the bottom of the rankings for a reason you're better off going to go read Supreme magus or the one story with the ants now those are some good Original Stories with actual character consistency
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The story is good at the beginning, but later the character becomes very hypocritical in my opinion, I kill an emperor and leave the empire in a war and then create something worse, does nothing for three years and then sees that his friends are dead or enslaved, to get angry and want to destroy it, but it does not immediately do it like everything else, but wait another moment to destroy the new empire or NNE as it was called. Also the tribe of land sees that they are enslaving and does not like it, but leaves them as such because it is their destiny, then rescues some. If this continues, I think I will leave it.
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This has good characters and an interestimg world. The personality of the MC is hard to grasp as he behaves in a random manner almost all of the time but the story is still very interesting. The grammer still needs much work however.
Should of reviewed this a long time ago :) Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying it. ............................................................................................................................................
The book is good and could go in so may directions. The character seem to have a life of their own though the main character coul use a power up soon . It kind of sucks that he hasn’t gained anything new but is simply getting back what he lost
after 2 years of being on webnovel this is my first review Ive made and honestly this novel was well worth it to spend the time to make this. the grammar usage and some spelling errors were made but still a higher quality then hundreds of other novels I have read. there was a few times I believe the story was rushed but the author made you connect with the characters and the development of those characters personality was well thought out compared to what I'm used to reading. I'm excited on what other interesting novels you imagination may bring out.
This was a pretty good 1st novel from a non-native English speaker. There are a Lot of grammar and spelling errors, as well as some formatting issues and the work really needs a good editing all the way through before it can actually be called finished. Despite that, this is a wonderfully entertaining and well laid out story. it goes just long enough while ending in a satisfying manner while leaving enough room in the world for the author to continue on later, whether it be with the MC or someone related. At the very least I would have liked a scene with the kids visiting their grandmother and uncle.
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well it was fun at start but after some chapter it got messy so I am off well thank you for the story ,atleast it was little more sensible as compared to many more stories
I f*cking love this novel. Honestly this is a novel where you can easily pass time while reading it. It has not so complicated story. Overall a nice reading experience. I really happy that I gave my time to read this novel.
-----------------------it is a very good novel his story hooks you the living god of energy is very interesting------------------------------
I’ve never written a review before, so forgive me if I seem to go on a tangent or something similar. I loved this novel. The only reason I gave a 4 star in writing quality instead of a 5 is because a good amount of words were misspelled, but that that can be easily overlooked in my opinion. I feel like zad, the author, really cared for this story and put a lot of effort into this. The characters are well-made and sometimes give some well-timed comedic relief with maybe a pop culture reference or just good old shenanigans. The ending seemed slightly rushed, but the author did it in such a way that it wasn’t poorly made. Overall, this has been my favorite novel in a long time and I highly recommend it to anyone hesitant in starting it.
Yes I'm addicted to this story and I dont know if I'm gonna be able to stop reading this ever its worse than that time I was hooked on coke hope you all enjoy it as much as I do
I quite enjoy this story, I'm quite picky about what I read and from the beginning I have been enthralled by it. I would have to say that it could use a little spell-check
Surprising there is not a review yet. Anyway, I'm not deep into this novel yet, so I can't give a score, therefore it'll be a 5 and I'll change it or not as I read along. The grammar is pretty good, no major mistake I've seen. Considering the chapters were supposed to be 1 per week at the beginning, this quality is expected. The novel is another system novel with a semi immortal mc. BUT! The way it works is interesting and unlike anything I've ever read so I'm kinda looking forward to the progression. Considering he is a "living God" you should expect some opness. It might not be that kind of story further along the line, and I don't really care if he's Op or not ( I like Op mcs), so don't go reading this expecting something too different and complain about it. Overall, I wish the author the best and I can't wait to see how this story evolves. Godspeed 👌