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[Revamp of Analysis System, check out, check out, Reincarnated with my analysis system 11]
What would you do when you wake up in another world with an Analysis system backing you up?
Sato Inugami fell victim to an explosion in his apartment which led to him reincarnating after his death.
With the help of his Analysis Helix system which helps him store skills and knowledge about the world of fantasies.
From ruling over elves to build an entire nations with the help of his system, beautiful maidens and subordinates, Sato soon found himself being formidable.
With his success soon known around kingdoms that posed to be a threat to him as he climbs up the rank.
Sato must now protect his people from Demons, Kings, and even gods as he rose amongst the ranks to become the strongest Ruler.
Note: This is a kingdom building, so if you like battles between villages, respect and strong subodinates, be sure to try this book.
¶Additional tags|| Magic||Master servent relationship|| Revolution|| Mystery|| War|| Mythology|| Ecchi.
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Well... its not bad... but its filled wirh plotholes, inconsistencies and mistskes. He allows mc to do actions that should be impossible for him to acomplish... he was a regular highschool boy and he can dodge a veteran sword strike, catch arrows midflight from elves with his hands. Wield a sycth so well. He can block a rain of arrows from dozen epves with ease???? He did not had any combat skill at all... and mc is so confident lol... not even 1 day and he orders elves to bring him to a F phoenix to desl with thst has been terrorizing elves for hundreds of years?.... you must smoke a lot of wêęđ lol.
Typical story line where MC dies and is reincarnated with a system. Low EQ male with a number of love interests and no clue on how to deal with them. Elements of kingdom building, though it is not to advanced at the moment. Overall it is an interesting novel, though the only negative drawback is that the author hasn’t taken time to proofread his novel. The number of grammar and spelling mistakes is not pleasant to the eyes. I recommend the author take some time out and check his writing in advance. Anyways, it isnt to bad of a read. 👍
Slime but wo everything that makes it great. The plot is rushed and convenient. I love harem, but the sequence of events are ridiculous and mc actions are nonsensical. I know that there is some profound plot behind his actions, but there is no build up to that plot. The reader is throw out of the loop far to many times and a "notes" chapter shouldn't be necessary to fill plotholes.
while reading the synopsis should I read this or not, hmm saw "fan of rimiru tempest" yep def reading this
There are so many grammar mistakes, or just mistaking a word for another. The story leaves a lot of essential things out. Hope the author will make a few edits on the first few chapters so at least the new readers could get invested in the novel.
Storyline is great and love the characters in it. The flaws are simple things like characters name not consistent through story. Unnecessary flashbacks that form part of the core storyline which could have been a chapter in my opinion. Oh and mc making the same mistakes over and over again. I actually love the story and the whole concept but its not nice knowing the MC is op and complains about protecting subordinates and making a change when he doesnt do anything about it. And its just a quick talk with the "system".🙄 Then again I have to give credit to the author about the world building. And know for sure if they reread it they would create a great novel. And remember just my opinion😬
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I can't get over the extremely bad grammar. Normally I can over look it, but not when one line is "I need do take closer hearing." not only that but just because you're a fan of an anime, didn't mean you should directly rip off parts of the system. And the random one word Japanese exclamations is just garbage considering the people of the land don't apparently know what Japanese is, yet still use it. hope it got better but I don't pay for something I can find in the free bin.
The story's all good and everything. It's just that the MC is ruining the entire thing. I get it that he doesn't want to kill others, fine. I also get it that he got overpowered without any sense.But most of the time, the intersections between characters don't make sense when the MC is involved.Also, he keeps on wasting time while fighting the enemies and everytime, some stupid unknown logic prevents the situation from going bad.Like once, the MC wasted like 20 minutes fighting some D rank Vampires when he just defeated an SS Pheonix in a few minutes.And the thing is, he wasted time when the lives of tens of Cat peoples were in danger and the stupid unknown logic was that they somehow escaped and Vampires who captured them already were unable to catch them.
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Overall a rather entertaining read, and I do recommend at least giving it a go. The premise is obviously heavily inspired from a few other novels, most notably Reincarnated Slime, but still retains a little uniqueness. The author has done a fairly good job, but obvious unfamiliarity with the English language has resulted in plentiful grammatical quality issues. A proofreader would significantly improve the quality, but till then be prepared for a plethora of...interesting word choices.
Very well written book Author-Nim. I was drawn in from the start. The characters are interesting and the world building is excellent. The grammar and flow are great and very clean. Looking forward to reading more.
I personally love this story. won't lie I came just to give a review. I ready promised to be strict but the only thing I can nitpick at is minor spelling errors but other than that this book is great. The beginning reminds me of Wiseman's grandchild.
definitely my cup.of tea/coffee.... jokes aside I trust author story building I'm having high hopes on this after reading some chapters ( 30 or 50 ) will rewrite the review... thanks
A novel whose world development background is unclear is very chaotic, in the first chapter it enters the world suddenly and is immediately captured by women who call themselves valkrye, they are humiliated and then After leaving the Valkrye village which was not too far away he was ambushed by a group of elves who wanted him to be a sacrifice to them and was mad again he accepted and faced the god alone and Crazy win. and this novel is a super bad bad copy of the tensura novel
Reading this novel have profoundly, surly and utterly broken my mind because of how utterly ridiculous the mc and the characters interact with each other.... the longer i read the smaller my brain become so I'm warning my brothers and sisters in GOOD FAITH to leave immediately and never look back....thats all❤️❤️❤️
Yo, Author here, Kirito_K5, rewriting this review for new readers. The beginning chapter for about 30 chaps in, are not exactly impressive, but you have to understand, it was learning to write well at that point. I noticed my improvment from around the second arc, the vampire raid, and my story writing took a good turn during the war arc. I ask that you be patient enough and get to the 2nd arc before deciding if you want to drop or not. All love added.❤️