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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionI can see the author tried his best. The grammar is not that bad and he updates in time but that's not the issue. The problem comes that with written fanfics there are good combos and bad ones... and unfortunately the mixture wasn't potent enough to make me feel something... I can see that if he has a good world background and some better details he could create good art but this story is just not IT. Author just needs to try in different areas. Also, if you add some reincarnation ff if there is a bit of lemon + harem that adds a lot of quality for many of us readers.
this is very interesting there isn't very many books like this on here that are in English and the ones that are aren't very good I quite enjoy this keep it up
Loving it so far my only complaints so far is grammar needs some work but its not to noticeable, nothing else to say other than keep up the good work
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