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Zusammenfassung
A reader reincarnates in the world of Mushoku Tensei as Seraphim Greyrat, the first son of Paul and Zenith born instead of Rudeus. Using his meta knowledge to the fullest, he aims to become the strongest existence of that world, using both sword and magic.
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Warning: A SLOW PACE FANF-FIC WITH A LARGE FOCUS ON MAGIC STUDY AND WITH A HIGH LEVEL OF DETAIL. STARTS OFF SIMILAR TO CANON.
Seraphim studies the magic system of the world and Battle Aura techniques in depth to understand them fully and gain the best possible advantages. He becomes overpowered without external cheats, a result of his hard work and brains.
Note: How this fanfiction is different from others in that many Mushoku Tensei fanfics seem to often get the magic system of the world wrong. The abilities that the Protagonists develop often go against the magic system of the world, are illogical and ridiculous, and something like this in my opinion completely breaks immersion. For example, ridiculous new magic spells and OP sword moves that get invented by an infant MC despite the fact that they are completely devoid of logic and are just impossible without cheats.
Here, my Protagonist faces various obstacles and problems during training, that he should, while also gaining insights and does what is realistically possible to take his training and fighting methods to another level. He also achieves things that seem nearly impossible or fantastical, but with good logic and reason behind them.
-It is a harem story, but I aim for meaningful romance and deep relationships. It is a harem story. However, harem is not the major focus of the story at all. It only means that the MC will have more than one partner EVENTUALLY.
-Because the Protagonist accomplishes A LOT during his early years, there might be no real romance or even harem content anyway for something like 100 chapters. There will be no child sex here as well. There might be some romancing and teasing, but just that, nothing sexual.
How this story is different from the original is that it is not about an MC searching for a cure for his ED, being passive and pathetic pervert all throughout the story while screwing around and doing nothing most of the time, but is a man on a mission. Seraphim starts from a similar point as Rudeus, but his actions cause a slowly spreading butterfly effect as he's focused on the most optimal path and BENEFITS.
In contrast to Rudeus's perversion, the MC can sometimes instead be amoral and do evil pragmatic things for the sake of his ambitions and loved ones, so people with fragile hearts be warned. He is not as disgusting, but it doesn't mean he's a goody-two-shoe white knight.
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SUMMARY:
-MC is born instead of Rudeus with just his meta knowledge and high talent. Taking more after Zenith, he has blonde hair and blue eyes. He trains his mana from an extremely young age, masters Battle Aura and chantless healing magic | A genius of magic and the sword, a determined true main character pursuing supremacy and eternal life.
-The story will have a deep dive into the magic system and how the MC interprets it (how I interpret what we know using logic). It might be boring for some people, but it can be very interesting for others (would be for me).
-The story starts with the same layout, and has slowly spread out changes as the MC is focused on BENEFITS.
-The world is the same as in the original, the only AU change is the MC's body, looks and name.
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oh boy this is bad, I've fallen absolutely in love with this story. It just feels so right to me, everything done just scratches an itch I didn't know I had. The title explains everything you need to know and I'm glad it does, everyone who goes into this knows what to expect and it's done very well. Defiantly recommend.
Honestly its really good i just hope the author wont abandon it and it has huge potienial ohhh and pls make Seraphim (MC) look like gilgamesh rather than some girly looking one that the image you provided
You are a person who is used to leaving novels. Most of your novels are good and attract me, but unfortunately you leave them. I hope that you do not leave this novel. You can open a Discord account and ask for help with ideas or anything. The important thing is that you do not leave it.
This is a review from a reader who watched the anime and read the manga and part of the light novel. I have read all twenty chapters of this work so far, and the first thing is to congratulate the author for creating what is possibly the best Mushoku Tensei novel ever seen on this platform known as Web Novel. The next thing is to write about grammar, which is one of the strong points of this story. The way this author writes is very fluid, which makes reading enjoyable. At no point do I feel like I have to stop to take a break or get a headache trying to read what is written. Along with this, the length of the chapters is acceptable, neither too short nor too long, which is a good point since it gives the reader time to absorb the information provided in each chapter and be able to read it again. As for the characters, apart from the protagonist Seraphim, I feel that they have been taken from the original work itself. At no point do they feel out of place or with forced interactions as happens in other mushoku tensei novels where they seem to lose brain capacity. Now if we talk about the protagonist of this story, Seraphim Greyrat, it is easy to see that he far surpasses Rudeus Greyrat. From the first moment he knows what he has to do and how to do it, with a great understanding of the world and its rules in order to reach the top. He does not waste the opportunities that are presented to him, he experiments with things that almost no reader or character had thought of before, and he is not as disgusting as the protagonist of the original work, which makes it not at all uncomfortable to read his reflections or thoughts like his counterpart. So far the story seems to follow the original route but don't let that fool you or bother you after all for both Rudeus and Seraphim this is one of the best starting points ever seen in isekai, they have a loving family, a father who is a knight swordsman with the 3 advanced sword styles, a mother who is an expert in healing magic, a maid dedicated to her job, textbooks that talk about magic and can teach you to understand the language of the new world, a little saint level magic tutor and connections with a noble family if this is still not enough I'm sure the author will follow his own route and surprise us with moves that nobody expected. This would be all for the moment, I will update my review from time to time, in the meantime I will continue reading this story until the day it ends.
AUTHOR this novel love it.AUTHOR WHY has NO ONE made MUSHOKU TENSEI novel CENTERED around GHISLAINE.the hottest beast women In the anime. GOD WHY ARE PEOPLE DUMB and NOT use her for the novel story..AUTHOR I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A NOVEL CENTERED AROUND GHISLAINE .author why not be the first person to create the novel,, PLOT STORY mc REINCARNATED into her with COCKtail or FxUxTxANARI and system OR TEMPLATE OF GILGAMESH..LET her be happy for once AND TAKE THE DUMB GUYS and girls,, AUTHOR I WOUDL READ THIS NOVLE ALOT,, ps author lets the hero get her in the end and make her so happy and hot
AUTHOR WHY THOSE SERAPHIM GREYRAT BECOME RICH LIke BATMAN Bruce Wayne DC and IRONMAN Tony Stark Marvel AND NOT POOR AND CREATED build A MAGIC TECHNOLOGY EMPIRE AND MAGIC MECHA GOLEM LIKE ESCAFLOWNE[watch the anime}AND NOT A WEAK MAGIC ARMOR LIKE THE ORIGINAL SERIES MUSHOKU TENSEI.AUTHOR A MECHA LIKE ESCAFLOWNE WILL LOOK EPIC DOPE IN THE WORLD OF MUSHOKU TENSEI.
No words to describe how good this is... fully recommend, any opinion i gave, author was ahead of me and implemented them in the same chapter i was commenting on. My only request is that Sylphy grows her hair to the waist and that you teach Roxy how to increase her mana capacity and make her reach at least empêror rank in magic if not gôd level. Same for sylphy. And not in just one magic, but in at least half. As for Eris, sword gôd. It would be also good to teach Zenîth advanced healing and detôx magic and power up Paul to at least emperor rank in a decade or so.
author can you please increase 4 to 5 ch in a week instead of two you know its rather slow 🐌 btw novel is amazing 👏so please don't drop it
So very extremely slow. It’s full of info dumps that honestly just won’t matter later into the story, and the author isn’t good at writing fight scenes like at all unfortunately. The only interesting part about this that kept me reading is seeing people’s reactions to him being strong, but the author made it so that even though man god and nanohoshi probably won’t appear, the MC hides his strength. He also made the mana disaster just not happen, so now there’s genuinely like no action at all besides him training with Eris Writing Quality: 4/5. Not perfect, but there are nearly no mistakes. Updating Stability: 4/5. Honestly didn’t care for that so 4 as well I guess. Story Development: 2/5. Honestly it seems to be nearly all the same as canon, except for things happen earlier. Not sure why either since nothing different happens. Useless change. Character Design: 1/5. I honestly didn’t get attached to the main character like at all. Nothing is different or unique about him. He seems like a random boring dude who reincarnated but a little smarter. World background: 2/5. Would be a 4 since it’s just the Mushoku tensei background and everything, but you seem to add things that just make the story go slower and lose pace and action.
Very good so far.... Hope you dont drop this just like you rezero fic.. I'll stack chapters for now >_< ...................................
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Overall quality of the story is good. Need to keep going forward. Please don't drop this story. It has lots of potential to become a very good fanfiction novel. So far I have read a lot of fanfiction novel about "Jobless reincarnation" but it's best on out there.
I just wanna ask is he gonna let mother and maid get pregnant then take them? Ok that's just a joke what I meant was is there gonna be lemons.......... .. ...........
a glorious remaster with an intelligent protagonist unafraid of success and with the desire to use his meta-knowledge in its entirety, a reading that lacks nothing and has a lot of potential, good luck and thank you.
I'll wait till this novel has like 100+ chapters. I want to read MT Fanfic for the Harem so ... Hope you don't just drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This fanfic will probably be the best Mushoku fanfic I've ever read, it remains to be seen how it goes in the future. The story is just at the beginning with the 5-year-old protagonist. Don't give up this story is great.
que mas puedo decir con tan pocos capítulos ya es sin duda el mejor fan fic de mushoku que eh leído hasta la fecha, por favor autor por favooooooooor no lo abandones jamás es demasiado bueno seria una gran pena
Just lovely... its really great and you've added so much details I really love the pacing aswell. Although the update is slow I am not complaining as long you dont drop this fic Please dont drop it like the rezero fic...🥺
This story is too good for web novel, you should start publishing elsewhere. I hate to say this, but maybe you should open a patreon. Just so you don't lose the motivation to write. It would be heartbreaking if you abandon this masterpiece. All in all, the best Mushoku tensei fanfic.
Personally, I absolutely love it. However, this may not be for everyone. This story is what it says it is. An overpowered MC that gets strong realistically. To prove this “realness” the author likes to explain the MC’s thought process and expands a lot on the magic system. This often leads to info dumps that I personally love (as I’m really into power systems and like the nitty gritty details), but some readers might not appreciate it and even find it boring. Honestly, this story is about an MC that’s TRAINING to become the strongest and the explanation on how he does it. Not a lot of adventure or action. (At least so far) If you’re looking for an MC that goes around face slapping and swinging his weight around then be prepared to be disappointed as the MC is pretty low key. However, I still recommend this to anyone looking for an interesting read. I loved it and I’m sure many of you will too.