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Will rewrite and add to my other fanfic - Wandering Omniverse!
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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionwell I haven't read it but I wont get my hopes up most fanfic where the mc takes over the body of the original mc dont do well because the author just copy and paste the original novel but change up certain things a example of this is that warlock of a magus world where the mc takes over Leylin Farlier body the only thing the author did was change up thing but other than that it's just a copy and paste fanfic I hope this is different
well, i had high hopes but seeing mc reincarnated as Yue Yang, my hope was shattered, its a pity, i couldnt see any interesting fanfic based on this novel
I have read 10 chapter it was just a copy no it more of a summary nothing new a shortened copy past a wast of time seriously i dont know after chapter 10
as of Chapter 125 MC pretty much has no change literally the same lines same attitude same decision making for the most part as the original besides being twice as strong and training his lackeys more The "conquer" targets are the pretty much the same The summons are pretty much the same The plot is paced quicker but skips a lot of small stuff just assuming you've read the original so you might feel like you're missing something by the next chapter I supporting fan fiction but it's honestly less than five percent change for the text that is there and 20% missing for the text that's just removed All at all it's not a bad read but to be honest... you might as well just go read the original and support the original author
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I am reading this, as this is one of the rare LLS fanfic. Given the things overlooked or skimmed over in canon, LLS has plenty of potential for fanfics. Just following canon plot, but carrying out the events differently could be fun. Cultivating a few new beast alone could alter the events, without changing the final outcome thus keeping the plot close to canon. But, posting the canon plot, including dialogues, with minimal changes here and there doesn't a good fanfic make. In short:
THE BEST LLS [fan-fiction] I HAVE READ!!! The first dozen or so chapters followed very close to the canon..then there where some divergences.....But overall this is one of the better versions of this story...Do not expect it to leave the main story too much but the MC is at least better than the canon MC.
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Fantastic! You have cut out a lot of the padding from the original and focused on the important things! Original yue yang also left so much potential untapped and you have done great properly showcasing what he could have been!
I find the story relatively enjoyable. The biggest downside is that the story is told like a rundown of events(essentially most of the things that happened in the original but shortened). It still has conversations but they're relatively short. The relationships are handeled kind of poorly. Like they're ok but shallow. I feel like the author could've done a lot more. There are differences later but nothing too big.
literally the same novel copy pasted with some changes only.there is no new things added. plus the cultivation realm of the mc is jumbled everywhere
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The only noteworthy deviation from canon is the speed of developpment of the protagonist, the main characters and associated secondary characters powers and relationships with the protagonist. The story stay the same even when it shouldn’t. The protagonist who should have been different from his canon counterpart became the same, just less perverted. Some parts are just copy-past from the original translation. Past chapter 20 or so, I started to skip paragraphs, then I skipped chapters. Disappointing.
the funky is happening here what is this is this fanfiction of the same novel I read brother you are incredible you can man such good novel into this I dare say you're one of a kind
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It's just a rehash of the original story following exact same footsteps and nothing new even wishes seem useless and unneeded. That's just till ch 9 I'm not willing to try further.