Reincarnated As A Not So Useless Sakura

To be frank, this story seems like an empty husk. Everything is rushed and summarized, so it's written like a diary for the most part. Pretty common among amateur writers, I know, but this one takes it to a new level because aside from the pre-reincarnation phase, there hasn't been a single line of dialog through the 6 chapters. I planned on reviewing after the 6 chapters, but really lost interest after 4 despite the really short chapters (which feels like inflation BTW, for number of chapters and updates), so just skimmed the last 2 for dialog. A shame, because there were a few instances for some amusing interactions. So overall, it just seems like a rough draft for how an author would want a story to be directed rather than an actual story.

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Sakura isn't useless. the main problem w fanfics like these is that they take away everything that makes Sakura and turns her into some Mary Sue/something she is not and make her someone who doesn't have flaws or character dept.even worse it's a ' I reincarnated as Sakura' fanfic which is 2xs worse bc all they do is put down kishimotos original character and act like a pick me oc in the place of Sakura. Sakura is a iconic character who is both loved and hated, changing her character is just cringe. If you want to make a OC story make one.

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