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Waking up suddenly screaming, Alice looked around in a panic. The last thing she remembers is a devil like creature ripping her wings off and killing her.
Seeing that no one is around and that she is fine she tries to feel her wings. Instead of what should be there, she feels like a part of her body has been stolen, noticing that she no longer has wings. In fact, she doesn't remember having white skin or her hair being this long.
Forcing herself to stay calm, Alice tries to think about the situation calmly. 'I don't seem to be hurt other than the fact I don't think this is my body'
Standing now she looks around finally realizing she's in an open field with nothing around except for a forest to the north and an ocean to the south.
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Will Alice manage to find out the truth behind her reincarnation and get revenge on the devil that took her wings as he killed her?
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This is absolutely awesome. This caught my eye, and got me hooked since the beginning. You won't regret reading this!!! Thank you for the good writing!! :)
This story has a great beginning and I can't wait for more, It makes me want to just write my own ending so I'm satisfied with an ending, but then I'll know that I want more... 😌 The only problem I have with this story are the minor grammatical errors, but otherwise this is one of the best ones yet! ♡♡♡♡
It's good! It's quiet different from other same theme novels that i read. I love how you build the world background and it seems that you put a little too much details. But that's fine actually. I love little shadow so much Good Luck!
Overall, the story was pretty fun to read! Like the previous reviews stated, there are some punctuation and grammatical errors. Some repeated spelling errors would be least written as 'lest' and first written as '1st, but I would(and will) continue reading this!
First of all, your world system is very promising. I have read many famous translated books. I found your world system quite a bit promising compared to them. There are a few areas where you can develop more if you revise. Character design, story development, and update quality are very good. There will always be some areas to develop. Every famous writer's writing also has these faults. Lastly, I will just say that your English writing is not good. You should revise your writing. There are many errors in punctuation, spelling, grammar. You can try the Grammarly app. It may be helpful to you.
To be completely honest, I see it as one of the 'typical' reincarnations I see on a daily basis around the webnovel platform. The story feels bland and it feels like it centers around reincarnation for the sake of being a reincarnation genre. There's nothing new except for some slightly changed concepts here and there. All I see are the same overpowered stuff, the same slimes, the same adventurer's guild, the same magic crystal, and the same concepts repeated over and over again. A good and unique world crafted with care doesn't hurt anyone, it just takes dedication and time. The protagonist feels off in a sense that she has times where she completely shifts in mood and acting out of character, giving the readers an off idea that she's not a well-built and solid character. Overall, it has potential to improve, of course. But as of right now, I can't immerse myself in the world the author is trying to make. Sorry if I came off as too picky or rude, but we need criticisms like these to help us see the limitations of our novels and improve our writing.
With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be winsome. While I find that it often lacks rhythm, I am still of the opinion that it is a relaxing read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story .
Is a great read, would recommend and is one if the few books I choose to read since I'm broke with coins. The one thing I don't like is how forced the Story chapters with Sora being kidnapped are because she could have used Shadow Zone in Chapter 80 at the end (Although it did make me cry for about 20 minutes). Other than that and a few spelling mistakes it is great world building, character and plot development are on point
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I am writing my third review for this book because it is just amazing and I hope the author would write even more chapters cause this book comforts me everyday.I hope the author enjoys another 5 star review and knows I support him/her to keep on doing amazing chapters. :D
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Hello new to Webnovel and first time reading a novel just got to the second chapter...well anyways it’s been a long time since I read this kinda setting so it’s pretty nice and this is a great novel I would definitely like to read so umm I don’t know how to describe it well anyway this is great move to read this is my rating anyway toodles sorry bye
Even though I already wrote a review before I just had to make another one because the book is now better than before and even on stressful days reading this book makes me feel better.By the way author your my favorite author and I love the chapters you posted for the book they are just amazing! :)
I want more. The plot is awesome. The beginning started out slow but when you continue, it gets more interesting and brings you in. The story is amazing because of how it was introduced.
I loved how interesting the book is and the way it is like an RPG game.I hope the book will have more amazing chapters.The book is very impressive to me because my imagination wanders what happens next since it is still not finished.
It’s just that good I read it in a whole day can’t wait for the next chapter.
This story is also great even though with the lack of updates overall its amazing and at the first chapters Alice might look Like an emotionless girl and that became quite a problem for me because it made the story dull at first
Great story trying to wait patiently for more. Tho I'm really enjoying this story so far. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
I loved reading this! I enjoyed the game like feel to it and the story line. Made me think of childhood memories haha. It's a very fun and adventurous read! Highly recomend.
Your novel is pretty unique with how you make use of the system It's also pretty easy to read with only a few grammar errors by no means enough to take away from your reading experience like some other stories on here. Your battle scenes have a great feel and I absolutely adore Little Shadow! Keep up the good work.
This is only the third book I started since getting the app and it the most amazing thing I’ve read even compared to award winning books I get at my local library.
This is the first book I read on this platform and I could not stop reading it. The lore and backstory of the world itself is amazing not mentioning the characters amazing backstory(which hasnt been released yet when I post this, so I'm excited). The items and skills are very unique and remind me a lot of my favorite animes but less Op and more realistic and relatable. The only critique I have is the grammar and wording but I just corrected it in my head and re read if I dont get it so it's not a bug thing. 10/10 would reread again a million times.