Zusammenfassung
HEAD ON OVER TO MAO: ATROCITY/REBOOT!
Daily uploads such that I'll reach an upgraded more interesting version of the first two volumes by the end of the month. Keeping the same style of humour. Just now I know what I'm doing instead of rushing in blindly.
Or you could wait a month and read volume three! Which is a satire on classroom of the elite and basic competitive highschool stories. But more than that, you'll have fun with Mao around.
P.S: Yuuno and Mao will be roommates from the third volume. Like not just hinting their time together but actually spending some quality time in each other's vicinity.
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I think I've read a lot of books in this platform, but I believe this os one of the best I've read so far. Although the idea of a Demon Lord reincarnating in modern times might not be new, I can assure you that this is beautifully done. The characters have carisma and the comedy is awesome. If you decide to read It, you'll have a great time.
HIDDEN GEM! STORY BUILDING -So far the story setting are great.It is going slow but okay since as the author mentions that it's going to be a long one(if he doesn't drop it and please don't it's harder to find good story with an overused plot). CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT- Going good so far the MC has a sarcastic personality and laid back attitude, that's what I got from him since he basically just a child now WRITING QUALITY- Excellent writing quality with simple yet descriptive sentences.The novel has a lot of humour with a lot of unexpected references that can make you crack up. WORLD BUILDING - Going fine since the mc is still a baby and is reincarnated after 3000 years.And author has done a good work in making it as real as it could be done in a fantasy novel😝 FINAL JUDEMENT : A unique writing style that keep u hooked on with a unique plot setting ......u get what I mean right.If the author doesn't drop it midway then it's going to be an amazing novel. okay goodbye🙃
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Hello author! Good writing skills! I have read this book and it is very different And unique concept to the other novels I have read about fiction. This can surely hold readers interest. here are some of my suggestions That I like to recommend So your book can be more appealing ; -you can use Grammarly For improving your writing.(webnovel also suggest you to use that!) -And upload Your content daily.(as you are doing and send it on diffrent platforms for promotion to attract more reader base) That ‘s it. I hope you can take into account my suggestions regarding your work. Here is my 5 stars not only for your plot but also for your courage to write. As an author I also know it’s Hard to take first steps so I wish you to be a successful Writer. Keep it up!
A pretty darn entertaining concept, no glaring grammar faults tho people can always strive to be better over time in how they word and construct sentences. Anyway, I'm not here to break apart every sentence, the story is fun and lighthearted, I even chuckled a bit during the opening chapter. If you want something fun then give this one a shot ^-^
I love it, the plot, the interactions, and the comedy are all much better than most of what webnovel has. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Ah yes, this was fun to read. The synopsis did a good job at pulling me in, it was a perfect summarization of the plot without giving too much away. The plot reminds me of countless Demon King and Hero anime I watched in the past, like 'The Devil is a part-timer'. It would be really cool if this got adapted into a comic, I'd love to see how unique the author would make this storyline. There were only 2 chapters so I can't comment much on character and story development but so far all is going smoothly. There were little to no grammatical errors so nothing much to complain about in this area. Overall, it was an enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to more updates. [img=recommend]
Ok, so the syposis was enough to get me started👌..Werewolves, demons and assassins are my kind of stories🤩..Looking forward to what this story will turn out to be..Best of luck👍
Here are my thoughts for this novel based on what I read so far: World Building: So far the world building is okay as the author give some situational description. However, the author can expand more about the demon world or even the world itself in the next chapter to make it more engaging to explore. Character: so far the character is fine I guess and the main character is okay as he have some kind of sarcastic personality. Therefore, there will be an interesting development in future chapters. Overall, it's quite decent road for the reincarnation and I do believe can expand more about the world and the character itself. Therefore, keep up the good work
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Great start. Very Funny. Hahaha. Who am I kidding? This is just one more comment so that I can get to 10 comments to get a rating. If you haven't realised yet, this is me, the guy who wrote the novel. Welp.
This novel has such a nice and interesting start. I really liked it. looking forward to see what will happen next. good luck writing, author!
Interesting twist to an overused plot, fun characters, and great writing style! What can I say, I love the humor of the story😂This one would definitely stay in my library. I'd love to see more chapters~
A reincarnation story with a twist, I like it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Also, excellent spelling and grammar, that's a rare attribute on this site :)
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The main reason I love this novel so much is mainly the premise and the fact the demon lord and hero recarnated together near each other and also the jokes get me sometimes and lastly I really enjoy the characters and how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally.
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I'll casually drop by to tell you guys that this is going to be a longer work. Sure I know how I want to end it but I didn't set the journey there into stone yet. I can vouch for the writing quality, or I'll at least do my level best to keep it interesting. My motive here is writing an entertaining story not a literary masterpiece and I hope that you would treat it as such too! Hope you guys enjoy your stay here! Feel free to check me out on my socials: Twitter: @weebjanai Instagram: @r1n.ah And my website which is in my webnovel profile's description.