Zusammenfassung
this fanfic is just my personal project to have some fun, i don't own any right and i just write it for fun, i think this as wish fulfillment fanfiction, and the plot is not that serious, this is just for my own enjoyment
english is not my first language so.. sorry for my grammar
i will try to update at least 3 chapter/week, so if there are more than that it's a bonus or i just writing faster than my own estimate.
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I love anything modern family the cheat a1 the world great the writing not to bad I can see this going places thanks again
I enjoyed it, but mc is too op. The story is more like a quick summary, it doesn't have a soul. The story lacks logic, especially in later chapters. MC already achieved everything he wants. I'm not sure what else can mc do... (chapter 13)
Grammar sucks, ability is too OP for this world, not much else to say. This may or may not be your cup of tea. .
I don't take the novel very seriously because the author himself says it's for his entertainment. But I feel that something is missing, even though there are very few chapters, Phil still seems very withdrawn, even with his first son. Claire should be a bundle of nerves because of how her son acts and be more worried about her son's social life. Then there's the pace of the novel, practically at 5 years old he'll already dominate half the world xD. After that, I take the novel very slowly since I know what will happen, he'll dominate economically, he'll know about stock, long, short, the market will be a toy for him, the usual thing in novels.