Rebirth In Super Gene

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Dato

So far it is looking really good and Super Gene has a lot of potential for a fan fic. Author is very knowledgeable about the storyline and he has tied it in very well. Sadly I don’t know Chinese so I have to wait for English translation which is currently around ~2400 to finish the book Grammar is good aside from a few minor errors although I do recommend shorter paragraphs with more spaces. Cheats are simple yet efficient and it is not too difficult to combine it in to the power levels of Super gene. Has a lot of potential for growth to tie it into a gene art or something without being too complicated. Wondering if he will do anything with the military since that was a major arc in the canon. Also fitness levels are an easy way to show off strength. Also, is he going to take the all the other powers such as Super god spirit mode and all the geno arts, or are you going to change it up with AU? Anyway good luck and don’t drop

LV 13

kickyx

Actually amazing, the story is great. Good job. bUT PLEASE UPDATE !!! ITS BEEN SO LONG!!! (just for the count so i can post) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

LV 4

krati_dhawan

very nice plot and a hard working person good .. ..... You can include him creating gene Art for body (skin, muscle, bone, inner organs) , mind and energy

LV 14

skulputulurubug

First chapter in and I already love it.. I'm a big fan of super gene hehehe please don't drop this and thank you for thinking of writing this

LV 10

Sai_Das

So far loving it. There are some parts I can’t say I like as much but idk how to put those thoughts into words. But really great read! Wish there was some more emphasis on his character and how he grows as a human being! Looking forward to more updates!!!!!!

LV 13

kickyx

This is my second review because author has finally started updating again after 9 months! First of all, the writing is amazing and the character is very thought out. Secondly, the wishes / cheats are pretty op for the sanctuaries but when he goes into the genoverse they wouldnt be as op. Please keep updating and dont drop!

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

The story is well written, but this is not a fanfic that will contain enough information for readers who don't know the original story to have an idea what is going on. Basically, the story assumes just a little too much that you have atleast the beginning of the original story imprinted in your mind. I recall having read about 15 chapters of the original before losing interest, but those didn't stick with me well enough to know what was going on for most of the fanfic. I assume that particularly surrounding events at the very start of this rather large novel will be hazy by now for its main readers as well, as such, like with most fanfics, i believe that this fanfic would have benefitted from the extra detail that would help fill in the blanks to new readers and ones further on in the original alike. That said. It really is quite well written

LV 4

THOTSLAYER

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LV 14

Waterlow27

Finally he is back with a Super Gene fanfic. So far it has been background info to show what changed from canon and it is pretty good. Nice to see differences so fast and going after the girls already. Keep it up. Some minor grammer stuff but still pretty good.

LV 11

Shershl

Very cool fan fiction about the world of super gene. With great pleasure, it would continue to read but alas, it was not updated very long ago. Please update it. And can someone advise some kind of fanfic about super gene

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BakoaTabwakea00

Good. The SG fanfic was good hope uyou continued. ..........................................................................................

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Potofhoney

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

LV 5

Kwetzal_Lag

Pretty late but I love this story Super Gene has a lot of fan fic potential especially in the sanctuary arc. Hope to see more updates no matter how long it takes.

LV 4

Gomtuu76

Awesome take on the OC, and thanks for not making the MC try to follow cannon and go his own path. Nothing more enjoyable than a familiar story with a new take. Makes it more interesting to keep reading. Thanks for writing.

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Daoist_david

by the way, what is the author's plan for the story? don't mind the things below, those are just for the letter count oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9ooooóôoöòøœōõ0uîìïīíū

LV 3

uflesh940

It's quite alright so far, nothing particularly noteworthy. Cool story tho, keep it up! Anyway, yeah, I suppose it could just as well be like that