RE: Vampire Progenitor

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Himmy_Hobs

Not a bad book, I can see potential. Not many grammar issues for the most part so far and I’m interested in the vampire he became and what he will further evolve to

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Spabsta

Shameless author here! Just here to tell you that this book will have similar elements to certain things you may have read or watched.. Here some questions you might ask and wany to know! -Will there be a harem? Yes! The mc will have many girls and from all sorts of different species! -Will he have children? Lots! He has so many wives so how can he not have descendants? -Any ntr? Naturally not. -What races are already on that world. I decided to change a few things. Firstly humans will have already been there along with some other tribes of monsters and demi humans and what not. However the races that people picked in the first chapter aren’t there… ex: Dragons, Giants, Vampires, Nine tail fox.. etc.. of course there are lesser versions of those species but not actually those. It makes it easier for what I have planned in future chapters. - Also want to add that im adding some elements from animes in. Mainly like the Senju bloodline from Naruto and some other Naruto stuff. I feel like it would be cool no? Mainly bloodlines though so its not too much. Maybe other things too idk.

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muky_

The story's concept is great with a lot of potential, there are not much grammar or spelling mistakes. I do hope that you continue uploading chapters

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DaoistblN2qF

Honestly, this job is disappointing. This novel had a lot of potential, but all of a sudden it started copying Epic of Caterpillar sentence by sentence just changing a few things here and there. Sometimes the author puts the name Rimuru (character from Epic of Caterpillar) instead of Esdeath.

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YellowTzyy

Hey I like your story, it's like a Epic of Caterpillar made by PancakeWitch. I like how your power is like Rimuru devour skill I hope you can holder the Son of Gluttony "Beelzebub". And more harem not just many. Like Keriena like 40 wife to have more. Please.. Thank you and I hope this continues in the future!! May have bless your health first anything else. How write to your heart content and improve so that this your novel maybe in the manhwua or Manga.

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