Pokemon Legend: The Journey

In a world where Pokémon training is not just a game, but a way of life, a man from Earth finds himself inexplicably reincarnated as Ash Ketchum. The Pokémon world he thought he knew from the franchise takes a startlingly realistic turn, with larger-than-life challenges and mysteries.
The differences between this world and the one he once knew are staggering. The stakes are higher, and the Pokémon are more than just cute creatures in Pokéballs. As Ash, he's grown to accept his new reality after living sixteen years in this strange realm. However, a part of him can't shake the lingering questions that keep him up at night: Why is he there in the first place? Is there a greater purpose behind his reincarnation, and what role must he play in this vivid, realistic Pokémon world to find the answers he seeks.

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This is the first story I've ever written. I've always got a ton of ideas swimming around in my head, but I've never really had the experience of putting them down on paper. If you could lend me a hand, review my work, and give me some feedback on how to make it better, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks, y'all!