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The world where strong preys on weak , the knights who maintain peace in this world is given heavy responsibility to protect peoples from unknown threat.
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It's very good till now . I wish to read the second chapter soon too . The way he wrote the writer's note has also fascinated me . The magic genre always is my favorite .
Really deserves 5 star . The quality of writing is medium not too low not too good . The characters are very good. The background of the world is still not clear as it is just the beginning , hope to read more chapters.
I love your novel, very well written and the story is interesting! I hope the author has time to continue! .................................................................................
The novel's cool only needs a bit of touch up in the grammar and punctuation, the author should keep it up and please update~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!
Its Mine second review.The remastered version is good . Its completely new & it started from beginning & the next thing is the thing where you were lacking 'who was talking was not clear' is solved now . Oh good good. The story development is good.
The book cover and the title caught my attention, reading the first chapter made me want more. please keep updatin. can't wait to read more.
The chapter 4 was good . I guess the story will progress from now on . It's just 4 chapters till now so nothing much to say for now . Good story.
The writer of the story should develop more & the pacing was off though but the fact that the story improved from the first chapter to second I hope that the story will improve more . Its good.
So my friend suggested this web novel . Its good till now . Nothing much to say cuz its only 2 chapters . Hope the author will write nicely from now.
Its good seriously good . I have became a fan of web novels after this🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Anyways this is pretty good novel . My friend suggested it.
This is my first review so for any mistake I am sorry . This was lit . One of my favorite novel , it would be . Wish to read more interesting chapters.
So author . I want to read the next chapter fast . Publish it . The 5 star I am giving because it's just 2 chapter & until now its good .....
Hope that u will progress this story more I have given this rating . U need to develop this story more & the first chapter was bit off . Hope that you will develop other chapters.
The first chapter confused me a lot if I had was only first chapter then I would have given very bad rating but since I decided to read the second chapter everything improved . So for new watcher I just want to say that don't stop after reading the first chapter .
Not much can be said thus far since only one chapter released. It's a decent hook, intriguing the reader with what it does. I hope the nameless speech is only for the setup chapters as it was a bit tricky to know who spoke when after the names were given.
Like the plot but I will not say much since this is just 1 chapter, edit where it needs editing especially when the chapters are still few.I like it so please add more chapters soon
Author here . The first chapter is bit short but from the second chapter I will increase the chapter's length . Please support me to release more chapters . Thank you .