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ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND

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Zusammenfassung

This tale is about a boy that was abandoned and left to the mercy of the seas ,while he was in the sea a figure saw him and saved him ,raised him and made him a powerful figure on par with the strongest people to ever live ,join our protagonist EDWARD LINCOLN on his way to unparalleled strength and authority.


first fanfic ,my English grammar isn't very good but I'll try my best .
leave your suggestions in the comments .
I'll try to update as fast as I can but sometimes I won't be able to post for an interval of time due to my preparation for entrance examinations

some future plans
I plan on introducing some characters from other stories and stuff . so y'all can anticipate some crossovers . and seeing the concept on ki ,yes I have used some inspiration from manhwas and the dragon Ball series .and I will have some crazy concepts of power and I don't want my MC to be downgraded by anyone so he will be kinda op


One piece belongs to eichiiro oda ,the only thing mine are the OCS I made and some extra islands I tuned to fit in the world

I had the same story in the novel section so this is the copy of that

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Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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AnRa
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍

3yr
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Newnoob

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kobeblackmamba

The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍

3yr
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Newnoob

AMAZING!! AMAZING!! AMAZING!! A very very very well developed story. The world background is phenomenal, it has so many elements that makes it really different from your typical fanfic's. Grammar wise.....it's okay at least it's readable. The author can improve by making paragraphs shorter, this will help us in reading more comfortably. Altogether it has great potential to be an even greater story. So go and try it or you will regret for the rest of your life.

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3yr
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TabooExistence

good story so far could use some grammar correction and some correct spelling but, other than that pretty good .

3yr
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SuicidalRussian

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ProSpect

well... nothing good, nothing bad, would say its below average still... hate the spacing and some other stuff tho... ......................

3yr
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