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An accident caused Lin Wuya to cross into the world of One Piece.
However, the system forced Lin Wuya to train 25 disciples to go down the mountain.
The helpless Lin Wuya had to accept the system's task.
After fifty years, Lin Wuya had trained 25 disciples as desired by the system and finally came down from the mountain.
"Is it Shanks, the master has come down from the mountain!
Shanks was surprised. Damn it, Master has come down!
Bucky the Clown. Master! The disciple apologizes!
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This story does not belong to me, I only translate it.
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Has interesting as the book would have been, the English is just horrible, it's seriously given me headache 😕 😢
The story in and of it self is great but the biggest problem it has is that the translation is done in a very bad way. If that would have been edited and the translation would be fixed than this would be one of the best one piece fanfic's
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it's good, and something new to me, but it needs a lot of work as it is a translation.
This, while an interesting concept, is just so so painful to read at times. Sometimes the cringe worthy writing can be pushed through for the sake of reading, it is a translation after all, but then there is the repeated inconsistencies with travel times. 2-3 days to get from Navel HQ to the East Blue 1-2 days for a bunch of disciples to arrive at Alabasta after finding out that their master is there… yeah, the time scaling needs to be rethought
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