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KidFury_HD

The fanfic is quite interesting, I like it 👍🏻[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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evity_

This novel has a lot of potential considering the fact that there’s so many possibilities that can happen since the story is based off of ORV. The story has good grammar and the beginning of this story is really good.

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Aerobix10

More pleaseeeeeee!!!! New chapterrrrrr!!!!!! Please updateeeeeeee!!!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Coffeeporse67

Ok, I guess I'll be selfish and post a whole 5.0 star score. Honestly, stability of updates in the past story (when this had 9 chapters and a completely different story) was terrible, tapering off for no chapters for 2-3 months (my memory fails me). (1 star) Additionally, I would say the writing quality is not something that takes my breath away, but it is an experienced use of words that allows the story, character and setting to flow very well. (4.2 stars) As for the World Background, this is an ORV fanfiction, so many of the items will be reused. Still, there is not much to say about the lonely chapter as of now. (4~5 stars?) Same can be said for the story development. Finally, the character design, as for the MC for now, it is written pretty realistically, along with the reactions of the other characters. (5.0 stars) Okieeee, now it's time to write a summary for the previous story as a memorial which can be completely ignored (Does this count as a spoiler:) Previously, Jakga was called to a gym in their school for an announcement. We are introduced to the class president (I think?) who is charismatic. Unfortunately, chaos quickly ensues as a dokkaebi appears. A few bullies of Jakga are also introduced, and the class president protects Jakga, finally dying to Jakga's hands as a last heroic plea of "I don't want to let them have the glory of my death". Jakga kills all the bullies in retaliation, and soon the first scenario ends. We are introduced to the youngest and pretty teacher who feels guilt at having to kill (personally she reminds me of Yoo Sangah). As the sponsorship begins, something interesting happens, because in addition to being in a different "earth", it is confirmed that a few main characters from ORV are in the constellation selection roster for Jakga (I won't reveal the modifiers for spoilers of ORV). A skill within Jakga wakes up (I also won't reveal this for spoilers of this story OAV) and he ends up choosing no constellation. Something tells Jakga to escape the gym before the Dokkaebi returns, and he end up threatening/convincing the survivors to act the same. While the others are able to escape to a safe zone, Jakga is trapped by the scenario difficulty increase the Dokkaebi had a hand in. And that was the end before the rewrite. (This can be removed if the author is uncomfortable with this).

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Malikim

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4very

great story so far. looks like mc is going to follow his own fate and not just follow kim dokja around which makes me excited for the future of this story. One thing i could complain about is the update rate it seems like its 1 chapter every 2 weeks but as im impatient its too slow for me. Its just my greed for more chapters tbh.

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Adithya_Jayan

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SaintLeiker

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