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What will happen if Obito goes back in time?
Can he save his friends and alter the future ahead on this timelime?
It is a story about how Obito goes back in time to save everyone he loves and how he change his path to Bad into Good and achieve all of his dreams. (becoming Hokage)
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I really like Naruto fanfics, I hope this story will be great and I hope the author improves more and try to create other fanfictions. Greatwork
The idea is very interesting but needs to be more developped. I have suggested somes ideas like flashbacks or other in a post. To show the way that this is not developped enough, at the beginning, the moment he see his friends is not developped, I would have developed this moment more than just a sentence from an external point of view with a dialogue or a hug maybe (because Obito is happy to see his sensei and the one he love and he saw dying alive). An other moment is that Obito, before the Kanabi bridge mission said to Kushina that the mission would be a success and no one would be injured and I would like to see the return and Obito saying to Kushina "I told it to you". But there is an improvement in writing and it's nice ^^. And the idea that Fugaku want a future without war for his children is so good!
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Yes, just yes. The translation is a bit off the mark, but overall, this story was done pretty well. The story development was probably my favorite part about this story, just to be able to see how Obito deals with the situation he's currently in.
Already read first chap. Doing now or ill forget eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶
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SELF REVIEW, Well I know I am not a good author and not good at grammar but I hope you like my work and I will try mybest to finish this fan fic :)
To anyone that thinks I am being a douche...go read the first chp...[the stupidity of the MC just shown in the first paragraph],....the character inst obito but some OC ****,,,,,,honestly the ideas amazing but its written badly