/ Anime & Comics / Nindō: Dominion
4.36 (23 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
When talking in infinites, unlikely is just certainty waiting its turn. In a paradoxical dimension where space and time are non-existent, infinite possibilities are right around the corner.
Including turning back time to fix the mistakes he made.
...
Some clarification, it's a regression story, yes. No, it isn't going to start from the beginning of Naruto's story. It's going to be from the new era.
Also, the main character is adult Naruto. One of the comments mentioned that they thought the story was about his son.
PS. I've only read the manga and haven't seen the anime. So, some of the characters that I write might end up somewhat different than portrayed.
=============================================
I'm open to criticism so lay it on me if you have any genuine problem.
Join my discord, you can give me suggestions and communicate with me regularly to get updates.
https://discord.gg/c3kCBE32vn
Check out my Patreon for some extra content.
I have 20 advanced chapters of this story there along with some exclusive R-18 scenes. Check it out!
www.patreon.com/addyctive
=============================================
Also, the cover art isn't mine. I got it from NeoArtCore.
This is purely a work of fan fiction. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the characters.
Tags
Das könnte Ihnen auch gefallen
4.36
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine RezensionFk you author and fk your sarada...if you wanted to make a shonen babysister Naruto who just makes everyone else strong while behaving like a edgy mc, should've written it in the story description...I don't like direction this story is goin into .... author has some weird obsession with sarada ig smh...
Sigh, Everyone is OC, Naruto has right to be diffrent person after everything he went throut, but everyone else,are way to diffrent and the way they talk with Naruto, besides Sarada Irks me in the bad way,
Ok then, after reading chapter 4 i can, without any doubts say i realy like this story, Naruto is much better Husband,Father and Hokage then he was in previus og timeline. Sarada Pic as my thanks.
I have high hopes for this book. The author is one of the few people on webnovel who know the concept of grammar.
it wasn't that long since i got disappointed in a naruto fanfic about him jumping to dxd yet here i didn't expect to find a hidden gem, man this version of him is way better than i expected, an op naruto father like we all wished him to be like on the original boruto serie, aside from those strange moments with sarada lol...well not many chapter out yet but i already enjoyed those 20 ch. good writing, nice twist of having that unknown entity helping him out, and overall the characters feels right with only few exceptions like ino strange behaviours. keep the good work author, waiting for more.
Spoiler enthüllenI can't wait to continue this work. She's gorgeous in every sense. Every chapter makes me want more. The idea of the work is very interesting and distinguishes it from other works. I hope for regular output of chapters so that I can continue to enjoy this work.
Good Author, the low ratings made here dont make sense, there are no OCs, everyone seems acting fine, great story, better version of Naruto. My only complaint would be lemons are lacking and Where is the Harem?
The Reviews are confusing, where are the OCs? I did not read any OC, and the Characters, seems legit. The bipolar guy on the Reviews need to seek medical Attention, Im afraid his retardy is showing up
I dont get the Hate, its actually quite a good read, there are no OCs I dont know what theyre even yapping about, Im very intimately familiar with Naruto Characters especially the OG ones, theyre behaving exactly how they should be, well except for Ino that was unexpected, I am guessing she has problems with Sai in regards of their wedded life. Anyways, Good read, I cant say its the best when its not even at 100 chapters yet. I have some complains with the Harem aspect, it has shown some signs and is setting up but Im very impatient when it comes to that, I hate slowburn romance. Lemons also are always with his wife which is turning quite repetetive, a bit of Karin action too, I just hope you wont force a pedo weird shit on Sarada, she like 15 or something wait for like 5 yrs or so then its all good ig. tldr: read it the naysayers dont know shit about the Fanfic, theyve only read below chapter 20, barely even knowing anything about the Work. Especially that Darkpersonjj guy, he is a retard obseessed with idiotic views on Harem.
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
i'm not good at giving review but here are the main points : Few to none grammatical error. Interesting plot set into the boruto storyline. I like the family's scene (Naruto finally using his brain to spend time with his family -> Use his clone to do his hokage work). Great update stability -> 1 chapter/day. Anyway this FF is great, give it a shot.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's such a well written story and it always keeps me in anticipation of what will happen next, the slice of life is also really good to see.
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
pretty good. same as the author's other novels; one thing I recommend is to make it clear in the synopsis that Naruto is the MC, not Boruto - I nearly didn't check this out since I thought that little freak was the protagonist.
Autor Addyctive7
I will support this story, because is similiar to one of my favorites Naruto storys, Hokage Master, you could use it as a help in your writing if you want. It is on Webnovel To.