New life in the world Hunter x Hunter I am AMORI

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HolyDK

Hello, I am an unapologetic author, I know nothing about what and writing, I sometimes regret not having done a bac L in France, bac L is everything that is literary, give me your opinion To improve my 1 fic thank you

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TeneT

Moi aussi je viens de France 🇫🇷 je laisse le commentaire en FR. Je suis aussi auteur de temps a autre. Courage dans ton écriture et plus important fais ce qui te plais !!!

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Sylar_in_7

Je ne vais pas lire car le synopsis ne me plait pas, mais comme c'est un auteur Français, je soutiens :D VIVE LA FRANCE, AU CHIOTTE LES JEUX OLYMPIQUES, ONT PASSE POUR DES IDIOTS

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Grey1902

fantastic 😍😍😍 best I've read in a long while

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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PunchingDrywallMan

I'm enjoying this story a lot. It has a lot of potential.

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Glitch_8959

I like it so far but like I stated in a comment I’m a bit confused where his S rank talent and his brothers A+ rank talents stand in comparison to other characters.

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Darth_Ullyses

has potential, will change if there are more chapters.

Aqzsedrftgthyjukilomp I like it but will you continue or write I think you can improve further authors more qui iheeftkgderuigzztjkvdetvvrruk

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gjffuh_cvtdvj

Authors at the beginning the story becomes easier to read but making a story with a character who has brothers that you must highlight also becomes more complicated than focusing on 1 Good luck and continue your work