Zusammenfassung
Ajax is an orphan who survives a massacre along with his friends but unfortunately gets separated from them.
Fortunately, after a turn of events, he successfully gains a system which helps him increase his cultivation but doesn't know what it is called.
But he knows one thing for sure, this system is mighty and helpful in taking his revenge.
"Whoever you are, I am gonna find you", Ajax mumbled with a disgruntled expression.
In a world where the Summoning of an elemental spirit is done through a dream when they are 15 years old, Ajax with the help of a system and his summoned spirits sets out on a journey to seek revenge against the mastermind behind the massacre.
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It's a really interesting novel plenty of action and character building a would love if the author got in contact with and artist and turn this into a comic.
Revised review of the author:- - Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story. - It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it. - No harem - Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts - New worlds - Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies. Hmm...that's it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply. Thanks for reading my books.
not really worth all the hype its been getting. novel is ok`ish chapter length is very small compared to other novels and a lot of the chapters, have repeating information or shows the status info that take up a lot of word count...
The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit: The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move. The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.
What more could one possibly ask for?This is the type of book i would want to read during my free time. Basically,it serves it main purpose (it's not complicated and its easy to read). I'm rating this book five cos I really don't see a major flaw. Thumbs up 👍
I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.
Some of the chapters are hard to read.. Just a little bit better than machine translations.. Well I dont mind the author asking the readers for grammatical help, but If you want to win that spirity award or what the hell that award is. You need a proofreader and editor.. This Novel is good.. I'll just come back when everything is fixed.. Work harder Author-san.. If someone wants to know what I feel as I read through the chapters.. Listen to DUALITY.. Sigh* I would've loved this novel right now, but-Sigh*
i really enjoy this one and i hope to read more chapter rallye soon. Keep create and we'll keep support this novel. the main character seem a bit overpowered but it's really cool
The story is great but it is difficult to read because of the grammar errors which makes it hard to actually enjoy the story.
Another author that ping up good revs for hide the bad and delete bad revs ah? Is like whatever novel WN recommend is just more bs and trash nowadays.
This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.
Outstanding novel, well written with an awesome storyline. I am overly impressed with the writer and his way of thinking and writing. Exceptionally worth of 5 rating!
VERY dumb (and naive) protagonist. I'm sick of the moments when he survives by fluke. the world is interesting, but it always seemed to me that the main character simply did not deserve the system
Really it's an amazing story and all the characters are interesting, hoping it will be released continuously. Overall until now it's good.
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This is an amazing story that has thoroughly impressed me so far. Normally system novels or hit or miss to me, especially the ones where the system can control the main character through missions. But this one so far at least seems to have a reason for giving the missions that it has, and that the missions actually serve a purpose. We'll have to find out about that late if it is true. Looking forward to see how the story progress.
in chapter 116 the mc says that he doesn't want to interfere with other people's affairs' but literally buys a slave and frees it because he feels bad, but when an entire tribe of "people" is in danger he says that he doesn't "WAnT To InTerFER iN OtHeR PeOplES AffAirs". There is so much inconsistency's with this novel. After chapter 70 he always blames his system for every little thing that doesn't goes his way, and it's like reading a spoiled brat that is op, and is expecting everything to fall into place
Outstanding novel, the author is very meticulous and seems to know exactly where the story is heading. Can't stop reading it, excellent wording. Reaaly worth 5 stars overall!
Was amazing story until author drops it after 1500+ chapters to work on a newer book which is average at best wish author showed some loyalty to readers after 1500 chapters site needs to keep on their authors or encourage them to finish their books so readers will stick around some of us have paid a lot of money for books and it’s a slap In The face to not finish the stories
The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar. That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.
I totally love this book. It's well worth the money spent on it. 5⭐'s in my eyes for all categories. As the character develo** so do the plot twists. The chapter cliffhangers are intense and leave you wishing for the next release