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Kapitel 4: Coming of age Ceremony

Hiro was eager to begin his training had packed everything he needed for an overnight stay. However, he learned that his grandfather was busy preparing for his sister Mito's visit.

Hiro: {WHATTT Konoha let their jinchuriki no no scratch that that means I'm Mito's Grand Nephew that means I'm related to the ninja world #1 waifu Tsunade} NOOOOOOOOOO

Takeshi: Huh, what's wrong, little man? You mad that will be training you and not you, JI-san 

Hiro: Huh, what nO No, not that Tou~san I stumbled my toe; it's nothing. { That was close. I gotta work on my perception.}

As a result, Hiro's parents would be the ones to train him. Whereas his father would teach him the basic stances of the Uzumaki Taijutsu, while his mother would instruct him in chakra control and calligraphy.

The Uzumaki compound transformed into a dojo as Hiro's father, Takeshi, a burly figure with years of combat experience, took charge of his taijutsu training. The air resonated with his voice, showing Hiro the proper stances to fix his flaws

Takeshi: (encouraging) Balance is key, Hiro. Let your movements flow with the rhythm of your breath.

Under the watchful eye of Takeshi, Hiro's limbs became extensions of his will, and his eyes a vessel for the essence of resilience.

Hiro: Already sweating bullets { Why is this so annoying? no matter how I attack him, he either manages to dance or use my attacks against me If I can't beat him, how am I going to survive?}

As the match unfolded, Takeshi forced Hiro to a wall. He smirked, Are you sure your child at your age has already pushed my father away? You haven't even landed a punch. I understand this is your first fight, but understand the blood that flows through your veins. Grab at your instincts and strike. Under the pressure of his fathers glare, his mind fell on his past life, all the abuse and shit he went through to endure it all over again.

As Hiro's mind went spiraling Takeshi decided to test his son's skills by pretending to kill him. The training ground echoed with the sounds of their movements.

Takeshi: (firmly) Remember, Hiro, a true Uzumaki adapts and evolves. He attached a sealing tag to Hiro, casting him in a genjutsu "Uzumaki Sealing Art: Shi no Jōkōin" [Veil of Death]

The atmosphere thickened with tension as the illusion unfolded, revealing the true cruelty of this new world. Takeshi's actions sought to instill in Hiro the harsh reality that adaptation and resilience were crucial, even in the face of apparent defeat.

Hiro's POV: Damn, WHY WHY WHYYYYYYY DOES THIS ALWAYSSS HAPPEN TO MEEEEE AND WHY AM I SO FUCKIIINGG WEAK TO CHANGE ANYTHING

NOOOOO, as I saw my dad take out a kunai and run up to me. I stood up in fear as he was about to stab me.

Damn and just like that, the story of Hiro is over, As Hiro's body was suddenly falling to the ground.


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