NARUTO THE DESTROYER GOD

LV 12

Viral_table

It’s a good story, although author isn’t experienced and it shows a little we all start somewhere, plot is nice and has potential for development. updating schedule is amazingly consistent. Not much people decide to deviate so far from canon and keep minato and kushina alive although I think you went a little too far with genjutsu and seal and could of made it so minato was just a duche while kushina becoming severely weakend due to the nine tails extraction, coulda put her in like a coma and have minato be a village loyal die hard. Grammar needs to be improved as although it’s not too noticeable some mistakes are seen every few sentences. I recomend putting the chapters through ChatGPT and having it edit them while going through them at the end and editing it your self. All in all a good read and good written work for a new writer. 👍🏽

LV 4

maggioni_petry

shitty. stalls too much with destroying the world. just destroy the planet and go to another worls and if you want to torture and scare the people of the planet, make them watch as the planet and their loves ones is destroyed in shows motion

LV 4

Guaca

All right who else is getting blue balled everytime a chapter comes out like comeon let the guy destroy everything that is the only way for me to release. Everytime anyone else has any dialogue it gets a little heated and makes me want naruto to destroy the village and everyone. I will pray he does when the chunin exams anyway your doing a great job so far keeping going.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LV 4

Lorenzo_Milan

First fanfiction i read that has beerus.I hope he destroys everyone!!! Die die die! They all deserve to dieeeeeee!!! Muahahahahahaha!

LV 2

R0B

Translation is bad, story is full of brainrot content. The story is AU. The story is not logical, author just push ideas and hopes they will stick together. This is bad.

LV 2

Austin_Scott

I tried to like the story reading up to chapter 17 despite the red flags (abused mc, oc romance {literally nobody likes oc romance I don't know why people keep doing it because any story with it is never above 3 stars}, and bashing any one of these would be concerning but it has all three, this is Wattpad trash don't read it.

LV 3

Night_wizard

I love the idea of the story keep up the good work