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Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)
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Zusammenfassung
Question: How would a Uchiha Uzumaki Hybrid fare in the world of Naruto?
Ethan A Computer Science student transmigrates into the body of an orphan named Renjiro in Naruto. He soon realizes that the orphan has Uchiha and Uzumaki Bloodlines. Join Renjiro in his journey as he grows and his quest to become the strongest shinobi!
Warning :
1. This is a rewrite of my work Naruto: Mixed Heritage. Key components have been changed.
2. No harem (there might be some romance but don't get your hopes high)
3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)
What to expect :
1. Lots of training
2. Cause and effect of our Mc's involvement in the plot
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This story clearly has potential, but the author is into simple things. Excessive and annoying attention to details (many details are useless and only serve to fill the chapter), lack of knowledge of many things in the work (the most annoying being the Sharingan, something that allows for faster and broader evolution), the fights are poorly portrayed (sometimes it becomes irritating), even if it's an alternative universe the timeline has errors that make the plot confusing and it will get worse, when you explain something you end up using more or less the same words for different moments that should convey emotion ( friendship, etc. A single super annoying example is "crucible", it breaks the reading rhythm easily, it seems like the author is putting an AI to write in his place and failing miserably at it).
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Warning, mc in this is severly nerfed. SPOILER BELOW Mc unlocks 3 tomoe sharingan at 7, then loses to a random 8 year old hyuga in a taijutsu match. His chakra is "nearing chunin level" while he's a genin, he knows no genjutsu at this point in the story, sharingan has gone from copying ninjutsu to giving a tutorial on how the jutsu works. If you've read the Wind Demon fanfic it feels like the author wanted to go for the same direction but completely failed to understand why Wind Demon worked. The mc there was some random who was talented at wind release and thats all, here the mc has 2 of the most busted bloodlines, and training from a jonin since a young age but still shruggles to be barely above average.
I can see that the author is taking inspiration from Naruto: the wind calamity and that's not a bad thing. The story by itself is good and the writing quality is much better than the usual web novel fanfics but its still not the best as in some parts of the fanfic the author makes the mc really stupid and give away some of his info about the ms sharingan when the mc wouldn't ever do that as he is very cautious. Other than that its been great and hopefully this doesn't somehow turn into a harem
I like romance and harem, and even though I prefer harem I still like to read monogamy. The thing is though I despise schemed arranged marriage. I would be fine if it was before birth or without the clan leaders pov/conversation with fugaku. Although not confirmed it just ruined it for me, it was pretty much good up until that point. I would even be fine if there was actually a really close connection between them but that isn't the case as of ch 25. the closest female was described at "cordial" from what I remember. ended up skimming up to ch 25 so honestly can't say after the arranged marriage ch. was bored and decided to try it out and that one bit ruined it for me even though it wasn't confirmed. The author seemed to allude it would happen though in the comments.
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good points of the story MC has uzumaki and uchiha bloodline and is super good at learning jutsus. the grammar quality is not that bad it's pretty good compared to most fan fictions i have read. MC doesn't become a god at super young age like in most self insert fan fictions. unfortunately that's where the good points end cons LOADS AND LOADS of info dumps another review said it but i didn't think it would be think bad while a little bit fleshing out the environment is good info dump is never fun to read. Author forces situations like MC is talking(bragging ?) about how unlocking sharingan requires strong emotions and also talks about the mangekyou sharingan when he shouldn't know about it and he gets observed by another uchiha. those two kids he is talking to didn't even ask him about it he just said it out of nowhere. MC abilities are heavily nerfed a 3 tomoe sharingan which should be able to track even a jounin ninja are just SLIGHTLY better then 1 tomoe sharingan. MC with uzumaki physique + 3 tomoe sharingan + 3~4 years of continues day and night training to hone all his skills lost to a no name hyuga not even mentioned in the canon who is just an year older than MC .Also his chakra reserves are quite small as he is surprised and wish to have reserves equal to a sensory ninja that teaches MC. the author has made MC a supposed genius with broken bloodlines and now he is nerfing him so MC won't be too strong .
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pls tell me u will change the original events like obito or not? as I don't want to waste my time reading the same thing as watching the anime u see.
There is not much to say since there are very few chapters but it seems a promising novel. Let's just hope it doesn't get dropped 😔😔
Another ai assisted author with a bit more indulgance in the story than the rest. Ai assisted anyway. 4 stars is most I can possibly give. If you read a fanfic with a bit generic storyline, overtly unnecessary detailing of completely non important stuff, no foreshadowing, no recalling, no hype, no major character development just pure unadulterated generic writing then go ahead. This one though is a bit less generic than most
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I like your rewrite it’s very good to be honest I know about the no harem but it will be better if but a romantic sub plot I mean the grind never stops is okay but we need something different in between About his Uzumaki bloodline won’t he awaken kaguia mind eye it’s very powerful ability it’s really bad that the mc doesn’t own last thing if u could make the romantic partner a senju if u are going to create a romantic sub plot
Would have been better if the mc actually showed any uzumaki traits like boosted chakra vitality and regeneration
My biggest issue with this story is how the author uses too much detail for every little thing. I don’t need to know how the desks are arranged in a room, I don’t need to know about the posters on the wall of a classroom, And I don’t need to know that the chairs in the classroom are comfortable, unless the character outright states it when he sits on it. There are more examples of this throughout the 11 chapters that I read.