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Naruto: Dominative Sasuke
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Zusammenfassung
Sasuke travels through the world of Naruto and awakens the simplified system,
[Ding, the host's blood limit is detected - Sharingan. ]
[Simplified training - automatic upgrade. ]
[Born with two magatama, automatically upgraded to three magatama at the age of five, Mangekyō at the age of ten, and Eternal Eye at the age of fifteen. ] ........
[Ding, S-level Ninjutsu Raikiri is detected. ]
[Simplified training - learn it at a glance. ] ........
[Ding, the host is detected to practice chakra. ]
[Simplified training -Chakra breathing method . ] ...........
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If I had to use one word to describe this novel it would be: Childish. Don't get me wrong the premise is interesting and the author definitely has talent, but the whole thing feels like it came from the mind of someone that hasn't matured enough to write a good novel. I don't say this because I think the story needs a big dramatic reveal or because it doesn't have enough depth or anything of that sort. There are several simplistic stories that work well enough without depth, but this one reads as a fantasy where choices and decisions don't have consequences, cringe is acceptable because it is a fictional world and the results are more important than the process as long as it reaches the point the author intended. Like I said, I see a lot of potential, and this author is for sure going places if he/she keeps this up and matures himself/herself, but as a work on its own, it just doesn't hold up as well as it should.
This is pure wish fulfilment. Everything goes sasuke's way and he doesn't experience any hardship. Everything is smooth sailing. That's why this is so stupid, the story is disconnected. Many things have changed, but the story didn't change much as a whole when it should. Characters aren't portrait right either. The main reason the story is like that - the author was lazy. But he has the right to be one, it's a fanfic after all
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This author has some unhealthy obsession with Sasuke. Most of his fics are about Sasuke...