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Kapitel 9: 9. Explosion...

**A/N:** I just realized there are many plot holes. The writing feels rushed, and I admit that it is. However, I take pride in the fight between Naruto and Gaara. That being said, I overlooked several important details, like the strange power I mentioned in the second chapter, among other things. I also think I made Naruto too uncaring about sasuke or sakura existance. And I think I've focused solely on his relationship with hinata.

While I believe I can continue the plot, I would like your advice on how I should proceed. Since I'm currently free, I'll try to write 3 to 5 chapters today.

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**Third Person POV:**

Naruto was rushing toward the village at his fastest speed, his mind in complete turmoil.

**Naruto POV:**

"I have to take down those Sand and Oto ninjas as quickly as possible. On top of that, I also need to check on Hina-chan, since I remember she was attacked in the original timeline."

"Although I believe no one can survive *Talk no Jutsu*, I still want to make sure myself."

"Now that I think about it... I guess I could use that. They would never see it coming."

**Kakashi POV:**

"This is bad. The combined strength of Suna and Oto is actually slightly superior to ours. Many Konoha ninjas are out on missions, and the fact that Hokage-sama is struggling against Orochimaru and the reincarnated Kages has dealt a significant blow to our morale."

"Is this the end? No, I can't allow myself to think like this. As the current commander, I must refrain from having such thoughts. Think! What would Sensei do in this situation? What would Obito have done?"

*Author's Note: Obito would have ran away with Rin.*

"Sensei... Someone, someone who can boost the morale of our ninjas. Someone who can make everyone believe in him, someone we can all rely on. But is there anyone in Konoha right now who fits that role?"

"Then I saw it—a flash. No, a blur. Someone moving fast enough that even my Sharingan could barely keep up. He must be relying on vast amounts of chakra to achieve that speed."

**Third Person POV:**

Naruto had just reached the village borders. He seemed deep in thought, as if he had made up his mind. Suddenly, an enormous amount of yellow chakra began to pour out from him. The chakra took shape, slowly covering his body—muscles, bones, and nerves—all enhanced as it spread. He rushed forward at a speed far surpassing even elite jonins.

**Naruto POV:**

"As I rushed toward the enemy ninjas, I quickly formed hand signs and created over 300 explosive shadow clones. They transformed into random girls wearing Earth-style clothes."

"Meanwhile, I didn't waste any time. I maintained a constant Rasengan in my hand and accelerated toward the enemies at maximum speed."

**Goku (Random Civilian POV):**

"Hello, it's me, Goku. I'm a civilian, but I respect strength. Right now, I was watching a group of enemy chunins kill the ninja escorting us out of the village. I was scared at first, but seeing the children behind me, I became determined. I stood in front of them, ready to lay down my life. They mocked me, but I didn't let their words get to me."

"Suddenly, a group of beautiful girls rushed toward us. Their unusual clothing made me think they were royalty. I panicked when I saw one of the chunin lick his lips. I yelled for the girls to run, but they ignored me and kept advancing."

"Even though the chunins were excited to see them, they stayed alert and quickly confiscated all the girls' weapons. But then..."

**Enemy Chunin POV:**

"We're going to make sure you enjoy our time together, b***h."

"I was dumbfounded when one of the girls replied, 'My insides are exploding with excitement over what you're going to do to me.' Before I could respond..."

**𝘽𝙊𝙊𝙈!**

**Goku POV:**

"The girls exploded?! They took down all the chunins in one massive blast. I don't know if they were real or some kind of ninja trick, but their sacrifice will never be forgotten."

**Third Person POV:**

The entire village echoed with massive explosions caused by the girls. A sensor ninja recognized the chakra as Naruto's and roared with excitement and admiration.

In less than five minutes, more than half the enemy ninjas were eliminated. Even those who weren't lustful hesitated to attack the girls, leading to their downfall.

The Konoha ninjas' morale skyrocketed, and they began suppressing the enemy forces. Meanwhile, the morale of the Suna and Oto ninjas crumbled.

**Kakashi POV:**

"This is it. This is the difference a genius makes on the battlefield. Naruto used explosive shadow clones in the most effective way possible. It might seem like a cowardly move to some, but this is the ninja profession. Our job is to complete the mission, no matter how it's done."

"This victory rekindled the fire in every Konoha ninja's eyes. I quickly took charge of the remaining forces. Watching Naruto rush at quasi kage-level speed with a Rasengan in hand, I subconsciously muttered with a smile, 'Sensei would be proud.'"

**Jiraiya POV:**

"As I fought the three-headed snake summon, I saw everything unfold. 'That gaki really takes after you, Minato.' Truth be told, I was beyond impressed with how he utilized the explosive shadow clones."

"Although I already knew how he had trained over the past month, seeing it in action left me more and more surprised."

"The more I watched, the more I realized that while Naruto was pushing himself by burning through a significant amount of chakra, he was undeniably operating at a quasi-kage level. With that thought, I focused on my fight."

**Hiruzen POV:**

"I saw everything from where I stood, and truth be told, I felt relieved. I now know that Naruto can protect Konoha even after my death. My relief quickly turned into determination. If I'm going to die, I'll take Orochimaru with me."

**Orochimaru POV:**

"How? How did he improve so much in just a month? I had flashbacks of that weakling idiot from before and was shocked. Regaining my composure, I focused on my fight with Sensei."

**Hashirama POV:**

"Hahaha! That's an interesting way to use shadow clones. But why did those guys die so easily? Wasn't that just fireworks?"

**Tobirama POV:**

"Not everyone is as monstrous as you, big brother. Still, I must admit—that's a very practical, ninja-like use of clones. He exploited the lustful nature of men to get his clones close to the enemies. For this to work simultaneously in hundreds of locations is no coincidence. It's a rare ability to take charge and flawlessly execute a plan."

**A/N:** Please share advice on how the plot should continue.

**𝘽𝙊𝙊𝙈**

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