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"Follow the Mythical Path and transcend life and death."
Qin Yang, a soul that lost it's mortal embodiment to the Third World War and eventually gets sucked into a mysterious black hole that drops him into the Lake of Origin.
MC: "I just wanted to live with freedom and my entertainment. How hard can that possibly be?"
???: "Then why don't you live again in the world of your entertainment. Here have a gift from me."
MC: "Oh, thanks."
Follow the MC in his path towards freedom and entertainment without self-restraint.
[First World] Avatar: The Last Airbender
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This is really good, please write more. ...............................................................................................................................
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Review for the first 5 chapters(latest when this revirw was made) Writting Quality(4-4.5*): 4.5 stars, bits of mispelling but overall really strong compared to 90% of the fanfictions on this app/site. Stability of update(-): So far(5 chapters) cant really tell since there is no release schedule and still in its infancy thus cant put stars yet. Story Development(4*?): Story seems to be going at a fast but not too jarring pace. This can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on your taste. I personally dont mind it as long as it still brings some type of substance and explains the important factors while skipping filler stuff. As of yet, since it is a new story the story pacing and development is not the most unique(since theres a cannon already) but it is not bad, imo atm it is above average. Character design(3.5*): Typical reincarnation with 3 wish type of character that js bound to be overpowered. As of the 5 chapters, character seems to be clouded with a dark past and the "as long as you dont betray me I'm not gonna kill you" type of character. Hope to get some endearing moments to balance the dark/heavy killing moments. World Background(-): Can't really be judged as it is a fanfiction based on a pre existing world(avatar as of 5 chapters) and thus author doesnt really need to come up with a new world background, just have to revise it for his/her story. The personal universe aspect of the mc though could be interesting depending on how the author will utilise it to bring his/her ideas. Since it hasnt been fully utilized, I cant really put a score.
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First Avatar Fanfic I read in webnovel so please update and provide me more chapters if you do I will bow down to you and become your eternal servant.
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