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Lord of Mysteries
Rawls Adrian, who was invaded by the “uncertain fog”, traveled to March 1349 (three months before Klein Moretti crossed), and Rawls, a “lawyer”, began his mysterious journey. trip.
Those who steal the hook will be punished, and those who steal the country will be marquis.
( This Fanfic is not mine)
(OG Authour :Light Front Passenger)
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The story’s concept is very cool. A Lawyer LOTM fanfiction, i have never seen that before. The grammar is ok, not unreadeble, but not good either. Some words makes no sense, and there are some rather strange sentences in there. The world building is ok, updates apear to be good. The design leaves some things to be desired, but is ok. It is stolen from another author. I cannot find the original, and i dont know if you asked for the authors permission before re-posting here. So a 2.8 is the max i will give you. If you start spell checking (with grammarly) or get a proof reader, tell me you got permission from the OG author, then i will come back and change the raiting.