My Love in Another World

LV 4

amaturewriter

look, reading the starting, I thought I'd like it..MC want to find love and have a peaceful life, plus tags said smart and badass. 4 chps in and this MC is a retard...the english is messed up but somewhat readable, its the story that annoying....see this MC was some strong dude in his past life, thats fine..dope, but he behaves like a retard. He dosnt sense his sister looking at him despite being far stronger than her [this important cause the sis starts having an attraction towards him after seeing him be so strong, seems like a shallow *****]. Then this MC joins a competition and pulls out a super skill and immediately kills his opponent. Not smart, or badass, its retarded, he doing the opposite of what he wanted. PLus its seems CD isnt that big of a focus considering MC has a skil that just makes chicks attracted to him..so yah, point is, u want CD, smart MC, well GL cause its not here