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Multiverse legend of Kurumi Tokisaki
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Zusammenfassung
We associate many things with the word "time."
When time comes we are born.
With time we learn new words, we grow.
Over time, we fall in love and give new life.
However, when our time is up we die.
I died and from among an infinite number of souls similar to me.
I was given a chance to become part of something bigger.
Now our words become time itself.
We are the one who decides the flow of time.
And now time will tell if we become what is expected of us.
* the photo does not belong to me, if the original author would like the photo to be taken off, please write in the comment .This will be my first Novel fan fiction published. I don't do it for profit or anything else i do this just for fun and hope to give this joy of reading to others. I have a lot of ideas in my head and I would just like to write them on paper, in this case, on the page. My English is terrible, most of this work will be written in translators. However, I hope the storyline as long as it doesn't get too confusing will fix the language problems. Of course, all the original characters and stories in fan fiction belong to their original creators.*
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Могло быть и лучше. Силы Куруми плохо описаны. Прочитано 21 глава, может потом дочитаю... пока что не сильно затянуло. Особенно не нравиться то что герой не знает мир. И то что герой не пытается вести легальную жизнь...
Ini sedikit membingungkan, bahkan dengan kultivasiku yang tinggi dalam memahami tulisan, masih tetap tidak nyaman membacanya. Bukan karena fanfic ini buruk, saya sangat penasaran dengan idenya, tp ada masalah dalam terjemahannya. Dan juga, ada apa dengan POV??? Jika anda ingin mengubah sudut pandang, sebutkan saja MC, nama karakter, atau POV 3. Jangan membuatnya menjadi membingungkan dengan menambahkan tanda tanya. Saya hanya dapat membantu dengan memberikan penilaian yang adil. Tololng jangan berkecil hati. Saya menulis ulasan ini dalam bahasa indonesia, jd anda bisa menggunakan fitur translate untuk memahaminya.
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