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Kapitel 1: Ch-1 So it begins

NARRATOR'S POV

In front of the Hall of Souls in Wuhan city, numerous children stood in a line, eagerly awaiting the awakening of their martial souls. Everyone adorned fancy clothes, but one boy stood out the most. Taller for his age, with pale skin and deep black hair reaching his shoulders, tied in a simple ponytail. Not cute nor handsome, but somewhere in between. His long-tailed purple-black coat accentuated the peculiar thing that set him apart – his aura and a sense of authority. Who else could have that much drip other than our MC?

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MC POV

Six years have passed since I arrived in this world. Life, surprisingly, hasn't been as tough as expected. I find myself the grandson of Ghost Douluo, named Yuze Mei. Yuze means 'kindness,' which doesn't suit my character, but the name sounds nice, so it doesn't matter. In my previous life, I was just a normal weeb. The last thing I remember is going to bed, and when I opened my eyes, I was reincarnated here.

Unlike other reincarnated individuals, I wasn't an orphan. I had a loving family – not rich nor poor, strict parents who loved me, and a responsible elder brother. So, I wasn't too worried about my family; my brother would take care of them. I hope they don't feel sad for me; here, I am living a good life.

NARRATOR'S POV

As Yuze approached the line, whispers could be heard all around.

"Why is Yuze here?" a boy stuttered. But as he was stuttering, a hand came from behind and slammed into his head.

"Shii… Dude, shut up; he can hear you. Do you want him to come here and thrash all of us? Because of you, dumbass. And are you retarded? He's obviously here to awaken his martial soul."

"I can hear you too, you know, Shin," Yuze said.

"I'M SORRY," he quickly straightened his posture and gave a bow and apologised.

And as Yuze looked over to the boy who spoke first, Shin quickly held the boy's head from the back and made him bow too.

"I'm... umm… sorry," he spoke.

"Haha… that's what I thought," Yuze laughed and put his hands inside his pockets and moved through the clear passage that everyone made by moving aside his way.

The terror of Yuze is deeply rooted among all the children of the Spirit Hall because of him beating everyone since the day they started fighting, and he called them his "sparring sessions." It has always been a one-sided bullying, but no one could stop it. If they tried, they'd get beaten too. And parents of the children couldn't really punish Yuze as he was the grandson of Elder Ghost Douluo.

MC POV

I never loved bullying the weak (AN- lying). I just do it for the system points; I swear. (AN- He's obviously lying; he just loved bullying and getting system points from sparing is just an extra for him)

Talking about the system. It'll be functional from today after I complete the entry-level mission. And I'll finally be able to access the shop and use those damn points I worked so hard to... I mean, collect, of course.

Entering the hall, I felt eyes watching, gazing into my soul with hostility. My body shook, sweat forming on my forehead. Yet, my lips stretched weirdly into a smile. This thrilling feeling excites me; I like it. Suddenly, those prying eyes moved away. I looked back, but there was no one. "I'm sure it was Bibi Dong; is it her way of testing me before I awaken my martial soul?" I don't mind; it only makes it better now that I know she's interested in me.

THE POPE IS ENTERING THE HALL OF SOULS

As everyone heard, they bowed towards the tall chair on the second floor of the awakening hall. Bibi Dong, as if from the void, suddenly appeared on the royal throne. Wearing a purple dress adorned with gems and holding a sceptre.

"Raise your heads," she said. Then she looked towards me with curiosity. I, the only one who didn't bow, expected this. It was a gamble; first impressions matter the most. "Child, why did you not bow even when your grandfather bowed? Do you think you're above everyone here?" She looked a bit angry, releasing her aura.

"It's not the case, your majesty. I didn't mean to disrespect you or any elders; I was just awed."

"Don't you have a sweet mouth for a child?" she spoke jokingly, then her aura surged even more.

'Just what I wanted.'

"Replying, your majesty, it's not what you think. My eyes see more than a normal person's; I can tell a person's power even if concealed. When I saw you, I saw power, more than anyone else, even several times my grandpa's."

She appeared in front of me, took a closer look at my purple shining eyes, then vanished and reappeared on her throne.

"Interesting, maybe you have a special physique, and with time approaching to awaken your martial soul, your physique is also awakening," she said. "Meyers, take others to a different awakening hall; Yuze, stay. Everyone here should forget whatever Yuze said." "We understand, your majesty," everyone said. As Bishop Meyers took every other child to the other hall, Bibi Dong asked me to stand on the awakening platform.

'Well, this went well. I believe in hiding strength, but not too much. I'll show people just enough strength to get all the resources and benefits they can provide.'

I went up to the awakening platform. Bibi Dong started channelling her soul power to awaken my martial soul. Something erupted, held back for years. Suddenly, a rush of energy enveloped me; it radiated outside my body. The ground froze, the room darkened, a purple hue covered the awakening hall. Shadows melted and bent. Looking back, a 7 feet tall figure floated behind me, and a sound echoed in my head.

*You've completed the mission.*


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