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My name doesn't need to be known. I died as someone who didn't enjoy life. I missed everything. Luckily God gave me a second chance in another universe. In that universe I decided not to give a fu*k about the rules. I decided to do what I wanted to do and enjoy life. I was assisted in that as I got a system, which rewarded me with various character templates of people like Neil Caffrey, Sherlock Holmes, Lupin, and many others. Watch me live my life to the fullest as Ethan Alvarez.
The main universe will probably be Modern Family with many other TV series or movies mixed in it like Brooklyn 99. You can recommend various movies or series and I will try to build them into the novel. The universe will not be supernatural. If you want it to be supernatural I can try to add it. You can not only choose the TV series or Movies but also recommend various templates for the MC. A little introduction about the MC is in the first chapter.
(author here: I really overdid it at the beginning, but it will get better after the first 7 chapters(at least that is what I think and hope))
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Only reason this is popular is because the modern family genre. This essentially a teenager’s imagination going wild with AI
The main character kind of just becomes and adult at 11 so there’s no real development so far
bit edgy for me, but could work for some people. Just ain't my cup of tea, but it's well written
The writing is quite good. But I don't like the story and mc at all. He became op so fast that makes it totally turn off for me and the story became irrelevant. There's no fun in reading it. Besides I can't stand mc's attitude and conduct at all
The story is more like a summary of what happens to the characters than a actual story. For example (Chap 39) We see Alex celebrate that she can do the speech. Mc lends one of his cars to Phil and Claire. Everybody gets to the school and then Alex's graduation ceremony and speech is summed up in a paragraph. Then it just says they go to dinner after and that's it and it moves on to Jay's birthday which isn't much better in terms of content. The actual chapter is basically the same as this summary with at max 3 conversations worth of dialog for the Alex part of the chapter, and I'd say about the same amount of dialog for the Jay part.
just a wish fufillment fanfict nothing special. dude is a repressed middle aged man filled with regret acting out his fantasies as a kid; parting n driving at 11, getting templates from a system, rich parents. doesnt help that the grammar hurts
It's like reading a shopping list, and maybe that has more appeal than this..
this is so stupid, its basically op guy does whatever he wants... whats eveen there to read, whats fun, whats gripping.
It’s a gross story. Starts off with a 11 year old getting drunk and a 13 year old having intercourse. Just no common sense at all. Another poorly written fic
Writing and update quality is good (4/5), but for everything else there's not much to say. The story and character design is butchered because mc is op in his world standards and he doesn't use any of his skills. MC flaunts his money, does whatever he wants etc. I read up to the latest chapter and I won't continue to read this because there's no point in doing so. World background sucks - different tv characters are mentioned from time to time and then they are forgotten.
Good start, rocky... really rocky early life... getting better since coinciding with modern family. .my brain just automatically defended the mc in his childhood but it really could use a bit of polishing... Like more stories than the draws for the years if mc is still gonna include his family in his life. college stint back in his 11th birthday ? Could use more context. Like did the mc do his tests in advance so he was in collwge or did he just crash into a college party? Then the thing about "freedom" bit superficial if it is just about doing illegal stuff, right? Thought it was gonna be more on the inhibitions from his past life or something. Or at least against toxic cultural and social norms . But yea.... Up to you. Not really hating or anything , just my personal opinion/suggestions right after binging till chap 21. If there's no hae between mc and his family.... I don't get not updating or at least letting them know he's okay. With how rich they are, you could even just point out that they kept distance but still had people watching out for him... And if mc actually has Spanish descent ... Really unlikely mc could just disappear from them. Especially in the us since it is not a supernatural novel and there's no mention of mc sweeping up his tracks. .... Suits for a lawfirm, BBT for friends in pasedena are my suggestion for shows to include later in the story ... Thanks for the binge and looking forward to the next
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This is an enjoyable read that I don't understand why people hate so much. The writing at the begining was a little rough but the way the story has progressed since then has been fantastic. The only warning I can give is that if you prefer the mc to have to work for his knowledge or skills this isn't the novel for you, otherwise I look forward to reading each new chapter.
La verdad cuando leí los primeros 2 capítulos me parecieron muy buenos e interesantes, pero después lo leí hasta el capítulo 6 porque la verdad me aburrí y no lo quise leer más es muy aburrido y estúpido porque carajos lavaría dinero y dejaría a una familia que lo ama tanto solo por querer rebelarse pero contra que es estúpido y lo haces parecer que beber alcohol,drogarse y tener sexo sea lo único divertido y lo peor es escribes que a los 11 años
I’m giving it five stars but I wish the system was better like we can actually see him improve each time he gets a new template and I’m waiting for one to increase his intelligence cause right now he’s kinda dumb but I love this 🙏
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.