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A normal blue-collar worker is killed an reincarnated in the world of game of thrones, in a world where the will to kill is needed how will he survive? Will he live his life in hiding until he dies or will he rise up and claim what he wants?
With the power of the Mera-Mera no mi and a dragon egg that turns out not to be as dead as he thought watch as he decides how he will live his second life.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionWriting Quality (3) Updating Stability (3) Story Development (2) Character Design (2) world background (1) You can read and understand the writing. In the time since a few chapters have been released, I assume that I have just started and it does not seem that the author will abandon any time soon. I found gaps when he says how when he says he knows what powers he has, how he knows about the "genetically perfect" improvements in his body, how did a common person (from the modern world) come to have a strong conviction of desire for power and dominance? As for the substance, I didn't feel it. It was as if I were walking a path and there was someone (let's say "plot") who pulls the strings and decides when and how the MC has to think/do. Not in a way that doesn't feel natural to me. Good luck to the author and I hope that this negative criticism is useful and not a simple annoyance (translator)
stprys literally perfect so far. you just need to update more as its very ling between chapter.
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update is not regular chapters are too short you can easily put two together to make one chapter it's going to take months of real world time for any progress to even happen with how short the chapters are and with how unstable the updates are