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*Emperor Tippy*
Premise:
I saw A Twelve Step Program to Omnipotence and frankly, I thought it did pretty much everything wrong with an SI story. So I decided to do it better. And yes, this is still going to be a power fantasy wank fest - it will just be one that doesn't require absurd ass pull "luck" to work out.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionTo those who are wondering, THIS IS NOT MY NOVEL - basically sharing it on this site so everyone could find it easier. Will be updating the remaining chapters soon. It is currently up to 34 chapters.
Are you an idiot? Or is everyone else for that matter? 1. not my novel, fixing it up and posting it on here to read. 2. HE WAS NOT IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH ANY OF THE WOMEN! They literally ****ed whenever they wanted to and Natasha made a list of who was the best. That's it. 3. Then, later on, he got into a relationship with her and they obviously don't do any ntr **** that stuff sends shivers down my back and i get soft as a sponge, **** that
Long story shot. It's NTR. Don't read it, you'll be bombarded with NTR out of the blue. The story was fine when everyone was just working for power, then suddenly you learn that whole gang is fucking each other in one massive f*ked up or*gy. The hulk makes MC looks like a beta and every girls wants to fu*ck him, and goes around openly talking that MC is 2nd best choice because hulk is busy fuc*king others right now. Oh and all girls in the story turns out to be slu*ts as well who fu*cks everyone in the cult and have list of who's the best. When you realise that MC is stupid enough to get in one massive se*x cult on mars despite being the boss he stops being an MC, like, where's your dignity bro? Who thinks a cu*ck can be a charismatic leader? If he wanted to wet his dick, go and wet your tool to virtually any girl on earth, you're a billionaire. MC was even relegated to beta position. You are the MC of the story in whose perspective you follow the story. You want him to best and have the best. Instead he settles for sloppy seconds from slu*ts in a s*ex cult on mars. Only a very specific group of people likes that sort of fet*ish and they're called cu*cks. God, i regret wasting time on it. Hopefully you read this review before your read this story.
MC is freaking weak. I mean he let BRUCE BANNER have orgy with betty, natasha and elektra. I would just accept it if bruce is only with betty but fck he just doesn't care even if bruce have s*x with natasha and elektra which is a huge turn off for me.
The Fist 16 chapters are gold. Then for some reason author decides to destroy his own work by making the MC not the MC anymore. The Hulk literally NTR's the MC, and the mc is cool with it. I've been wanting to write a Marvel Fan Fic, and this LN is a perfect example of what to do, and what NOT to do for a sucessful LN. Anyhoot, ouch. Not sure why the author destroyed his own work, Did your account get hacked bro?
One of my favorite marvel fan-fics until the NTR. And yes i get the girls are not his "girls" but banner getting the main character treatment and from the context from the chapter is that that everyone is having sex with everyone. That chapter ruined the picture i had of the story so far. Now all i can see is the Mc being some beta hippie male while all the major characters are throwing orgys like a bunch of degenerates.
The major characters in this novel has an orgy like relationship where they **** eachother and has competition and some order weird ntr ****. Weird af can’t read the novel seriously anymore.
Fucking hell doesnt deserve my time of day since one of the fucking theme is ntr. This **** was supposed to be a good book with great potential but the mother****er had to add ntr out the blue I mean seriously what the hell is wrong with you to make one of the most respectable characters in the marvel universe into a fucking slut and the main character is **** because of that so around of applause of the most triggering fucking fanfic of all time.
Pretty much garbage took the idea from twelve step to omnipotence on fanfiction and infested it with pure **** the lowest of **** the burn your eyebrows hot stinky **** this is a standalone and there is no similarities with any of the original characters there aren't even really characters in the story it's like some 15 year old got tapity tap and his mom helped him edit it well to summarise the review DONT WASTE YOUR PRECIOUS TIME ON FILTH AND GARBAGE
This stuff is just NTR no one likes that stuff and everyone who comments said it is NTR so your the idiot not us if it was just one then, then that person is in the wrong, but that's not the case is it you just don't want to see it and how is the hulk even fvcking when in the movies said specifically he can't or he would kill that person specifically Natasha who is just human so please stop posting it in my opinion this stuff makes me want to vomit every time I see the title or cover and I wish to never see this again in my life or you can continue to write this. 😒
MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!! MC IS NTR'D BY THE HULK .. DROPPED!!!!
im just here to give more hate to this cucked fetish people........................................................................................
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Don't even bother reading this f*cking trash of a novel. I came across this fanfic before on fanfiction.net and it is GARBAGE. This story turns a bunch of good characters in marvel into wanton sluts for Bruce's dick (not the MC if you're wondering). His eventual girlfriend (Natasha) prefers sex with Bruce because apparently he "f*cks like a god" and she made sure everyone knew about that by making a F*CKING LIST OF ALL THE BEST LAYS SHE'S HAD AND POSTING IT IN A PUBLIC PLACE. God, f*ck this novel. I don't even know what the author was thinking when he wrote this. Wtf is his obsession with Bruce Banner anyway?
I honestly think the author has an inferiority complex. Yeah I get that the mc wasn’t with the girls and he was just having sex for the sake of it... but I see no reason as to why the author has put that scene in there. NTR is a huge turnoff for the mass majority and personally the beta male/Japanese MC mentality is just annoying. The author made this novel because he didn’t like 12 steps to omnipotence, I already didn’t like 12 steps to omnipotence, this is much worse to me.
Absolutely amazing. It hasn't even been out for long and I'm hooked. I want more and I want him to take whatever he can especially the spirit of vengeance from ghost Rider. I can't wait to read more. Please keep up the good work and don't stop posting. This novel is amazing
Spoiler enthüllenObjectively this is a 4 with a questionable versions of characters, but I give this a 2 as it is not my taste nor is it something I would ever start reading if I had known what I know now. It was starting very nice but reality the author was only leading us. The novel stared with a certain perspective, tone, and course of the plot and hints of romance(barely). It built up the Mc in a certain way that I enjoyed, then all of sudden just blow it all up in 1 chapter. I’ll admit I stuck to it for 2 more because of how interesting and well the story was but the next 2 chapters only further ruined it. The Mc is not what he was made to be, the characters aren’t what they are made to be, and the course of the story isn’t what it was made out to be. If the author had any warnings of such thing happening, I wouldn’t even have started reading it. As the person transferring this novel here, I’d appreciate it if you had mentioned such problem somewhere.
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Let's bring the story up for everyone to read. Free af by the way....... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ... .. .. . . . .. . . .