/ Eastern / Martial Spirit World [Old Version]

Martial Spirit World [Old Version] Original

Martial Spirit World [Old Version]

Eastern 47 Kapitel 1.0M Ansichten
Autor: FallacyPage

4.37 (40 Bewertungen)

Lesen
Über Inhaltsverzeichnis Reviews

Zusammenfassung

Wang Xue was known as the Bloody Monarch in his previous life. He was known to slaughter anyone he didn’t like and was even capable of killing an innocent child by a whim.

Because of this he didn’t have any friend and didn’t have any lover all his life, even prostitutes avoided him for the fear of being killed by him.

As a result when he was killed no one mourn for him.

He died in the cataclysm that he prepared to kill the people that wanted to kill him together with a Celestial Empire.

With the Wheel of Reincarnation broken no one should’ve been able to get another chance in life, but he did and found its way to the body of Wang Jia.

This is the tale of the one who have fallen from above and had to start over his new life from scratch, will he regain his name as the Bloody Monarch or will he become a hero for the people?

**

P.S this novel is not for those who do not like killing. Seriously, if you like a good guy MC who only kills guys and spares a girl then add her to his own HAREM then this novel is not for you.

Also the MC is ruthless and cruel to people who messed with him. Long story short, if you want to read this then expect a lot of violence.

**

Vote if you liked it

Leave a review with your honest opinion

Also the cover is not mine, the credit for the cover belongs to its original creator

**

https://discord.gg/J4RHwr3

Parental Guidance Suggested
  1. Lovely_Assassin
    Lovely_Assassin Beigetragen 2
  2. Jinchusage
    Jinchusage Beigetragen 1
  3. Zenthon
    Zenthon Beigetragen 1

Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

Das könnte Ihnen auch gefallen

40Rezensionen

4.37

  • Qualität des Schreibens
  • Veröffentlichungsstabilität
  • Geschichtenentwicklung
  • Charakter-Design
  • Welthintergrund

Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen

Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
Beyond_Namez

Terrible grammar. You need to edit your chapters, Or use a program to fix your grammar mistakes. No real world background. Pheonix empire? Dimension? No world? You said Pheonix Empire is a dimension? Did he destroy the whole Galaxy? Empire? World? The MC has never seen a genius like the one he currently possesses? He comes from a Celestial Empire. Also Is Willow State a villiage? State? City? According to you EVERYONE in Willow State knows him and he is well liked. While being a Mortal. I see that you mentioned that he lived in a City but never said the name of it or anything. You just said he is well liked by everyone in Willow State. Also how did Fenrir know that that was the same guy? If you reincarnate do you keep your old spirit if so how did he get a new one? Also many people don't know the secret of the two boulders but other people also tried it, does it mean they also meet the same spirit " Fenrir "? So just anyone grave robs people even level 7 cultivators lmao. Wang Xue wasn't even a cultivator. Seems like people are suprised over level 7 cultivators. I doubt the genius lover had anything good all they knew was that she had talent. MC breaks his morals and doesn't kill the girl. When did he pay 100 silver? It said that he paid 50 silver? He might be lying though but why would he lie to that girl. Also he let the girl stay in his room so much for a " Loner " " As this happens Wang Xue, who was hailed as the cruelest and bloody person in 3 dimensions. " " Everybody that had lost their lives in that world will not be able to find salvation and go through reincarnation, all of the souls that's present in the dimension when the cataclysm were all shattered whether it be those old monsters or the weak peasants' everyone was the same. " Yet he doesn't kill the girl. " Logic "

Spoiler enthüllen
5yr
9 Antworten anzeigen
Enlightened_Being

"P.S this novel is not for those who do not like killing. Seriously, if you like a good guy MC who only kills guys and spares a girl then add her to his own HAREM then this novel is not for you." with this on the Synopsis, I don't need to read to give you a 5 stars, I will give you even before reading your story because I like it.

5yr
1 Antworten anzeigen
Programmer

Nice story. I like it so far. Remind me of reverend insanity. No romance so far. Anyway hope not a harem. Harem seem unrealistic to me. Also hope there is unreasonable plot armor. The one thing that sort of bug me. Is how grave robbers come the day he woke up. Like out of last 3 month they come now. Right when he woke up. Out of the last 90 days. They come now. Isnt that a little coincidental.

5yr
4 Antworten anzeigen
FallacyPage

Fallacy here, ignore the shameless 5 five star. I just want to write to make this a good novel and let my readers enjoy. But for those people that want a romance so desperately, I may not be able to provide in the early chapters. I also want to write a romance but from my past novels rushing it never once worked for me, I want to write an overpowered MC who kills a lot of people he doesn't like alright? So if I were to rush the romance and introduce a two-dimensional heroine no one will like that so please understand. I want to write romance as fast as possible but I also want to flesh out the MC (although I suck at doing so.) P.S. I like reading comments and reviews alike, whether it be trash talk or praise I always read all the responses that I get, especially the ones that point my mistakes that let me improve. This is a long rambling review.

5yr
11 Antworten anzeigen
LEGENDS

This is a great novel and I mean great and if you read the first 4 chapters you will love it too ( and if you don't you need to have a check up at the hospital ). The thing that I would love to happen is if you can post more chapters a day. =)

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
PoisonHorn

After reading 15 chapters. This novel has very good potential for top 100. Setting is good, character is unique unlike others where there's killing a lot and acting like a hero saving others. Translation is not good. Too many fault in Grammer. Give it consistency and daily updates; it'll surely spear

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
AngelsCreed

Just wanted to ask, how is the chapter release like going forward? Irregular or set chapter release? Would really love it if you could do regular release! This novel is really good but i don't want the anxiety of not knowing when the next chapter is coming out, ya feel?

5yr
1 Antworten anzeigen
StormSnail

This is a Great novel that no questions asked gets my blood boiling everytime I read through it I highly recommend giving this one a read. :-D

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
LeoRex

great story plus the brutal character of MC is necessary for the violent set-up of the story.. although the mc doesnt care much about gender is also necessary because in a world where trust is britle or fragile.. trusting other character would be risky...so i think the author really made a reasonable MC for being brutal....i hope the author would release few chapters at a time

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
AngelsCreed

Also hoping that the mc doesn't change too much. I have seen too many stories with dark MCs suddenly switch to being good guys. From cold blooded killing to friendship is rainbows

5yr
1 Antworten anzeigen
peerless123

sometimes makes mistakes in the spelling of a word or misses words to form a proper sentence,good story development so far but wish main character had a disguise technique cause it would be convenient now and in the future just in case someone sees him and i wish the main character would slaughter people more,he world background hasn't been that thoroughly explained yet

Spoiler enthüllen
5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
SnakeEatSun

Wang Xue I wonder what that cat really I need to know badly.I have the next chapter can come out quickly I can not wait to read it.I love thing like blood and poison.I wonder if he going to get a martial Spirit with the blood or poison Attribute.

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
Evil_Lord_Rakshasa

É de fato divertido e eu gostei muito, mas não posso deixar de dizer o quanto eu odeio pegar novels novas, já que tenho que esperar os lançamentos de novos capítulos(frustrante).

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
myeyesburn

Good gooe good good good good good. But not to goor not too goor not 5oo tood stioocgood still good stirll goood r3coommended do4 cruel pp3epple

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
butthead

Well written good story good read 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌ Well written good story good read 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
AvIdReAdEr01

The way the author set up the world was fantastic and sort of fast paced but it was well done. It is just started so I won't give it a 5 star review I might change it once more content is added. But so far the story has been great it gave a small backstory on the character and set up the plot rather nicely it just has 8 chapter so far from the time of my review but I give it a 4+ hopefully the author explains the world and it's cultivation so it won't be another martial God asura

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
icingfire

I was really getting into this story but the author said he was going to do a mass release that was 5 months ago other then that he did a great job sticking to the mc idea and creating a world

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
FadingDawn

Dunno if I want to start this since it's probably going to get dropped... I'll start if it makes it to 100 chapters. .

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
N_addictOoO

Good original novel. Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms. How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen
Notreve

A+_____________________________________________________________________________like_____________________________________________________________________________________________________98/100____________________________________________________

5yr
0 Antworten anzeigen

Autor FallacyPage