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What if the man of steel fell into the marvel universe? what kind of change would it bring?
english is not my primary language, this fancition is being translated from my mother tongue by google translator.
I was mainly inspired by the Avengers of Steel fanficition By: Reyel
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Grammar needs help so any type of proofreader or editor would do this fanfic wonders.... MC stays for the press after he saves someone like someone who just wants fame anr popularity, worst of all the MC is a full blown moron by telling the world how his powers work and essentially telling them how he can be beaten.... told them that his powers come from the yellow sun lol had potential but it became a waste of time
it is a chinese novel ...................................................................................................................................
pretty good read dude, some errors here and there but its nothing i havent seen before. ill just ask you not to force the plot and as it is going it seems good
Since this is a Google translate book I expected it to be bad, and it is, but I wasn't expecting this. The first chapters are like a first impression, so make it good. First there is the inconsistency in spelling of names, second the flash forward at the end of chapter 1 immediately flowing into a flash back at the beginning of chapter 2. That's not even a full 2 chapters and I had to stop. I suggest that you use Grammarly and reread your work. Even if English isn't your first language you should be able to read your own work enough to understand it.
I hope to read more chapters of this cause so far it has a very good plot and i defenitly can see potential to get even better. Hope you dont drop this.
Read this fictional novel crossover where the author really takes the fictional character of Superman and connects it to marvel in an efficient manner. Hope to read more chapers in the future.