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Follow the captivating journey of Ken Takagi, a high school baseball prodigy whose dreams were shattered by a devastating shoulder injury during a crucial match. After being forced to quit baseball and become a regular office worker, his life turns sour upon seeing his teammates compete on the professional level while he wallows in pain and self-pity.

However, fate has other plans for Ken when he's granted a second chance, thrust back into his middle schooler self with a powerful ally—the Major League System.

With a newfound opportunity to rewrite his destiny, Ken embarks on a quest to reclaim the glory he once lost. Armed with the Major League System, he navigates the challenges of adolescence, friendship, and the pursuit of greatness. As Ken strives to overcome the mistakes of his past and shape a future he can be proud of, readers are taken on an exhilarating ride through the world of baseball, where dreams are made and broken.

Will Ken be able to rise above the setbacks, hone his skills, and fulfill his lifelong dream of becoming a professional baseballer? With the Major League System at his disposal, the journey is fraught with excitement, setbacks, and unexpected twists. This is a tale of resilience, redemption, and the pursuit of excellence—a story that will keep you eagerly turning the pages, yearning to see if Ken can hit a home run in rewriting his own destiny. Get ready for a thrilling exploration of passion, determination, and the unwavering spirit of a young athlete chasing greatness.

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leeroycgna

Author here. Originally I posted this story back in January, taking it down as it was in another competition. However, since I did not have any great success in said competition, I have decided to upload exclusively to Webnovel. First volume is complete and I will be releasing 2 chapters a day while I continue to write the Second volume. For those of you who have already read the first volume, there have been no changes so unless you wish to rehash what you've already read, then there's no need to read again. A few points to note below: No romance in first volume despite the romance tag. MC is in Middle School and I am not one to write such things. This is primarily a slice-of-life/youth drama novel, mixing School Life and competitive sports together. The book is based in Japan. Names are read as (First name, Family name) ie: Ken Takagi, Daichi Suzuki. There are some Japanese puns/references throughout which I do my best to explain afterwards, even if it takes some of the humor away from it. No I am not Japanese, however I do my best to research everything possible. Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the story. Please feel free to comment below or on any of the chapters should you feel the urge to, I'd be happy to answer them.

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MonitoKing

Keep it up dude. Im really enjoying the book so far 🔥🔥

9mth
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HGells
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This is a good story! I read it when it was originally uploaded and enjoyed every minute of it! I’m excited to see where the author takes book 2, although it has been frustrating to have to wait for it to come out lol. Hopefully the author release a big chunk of book 2 to start us off with a bang!

10mth
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Rabbitt436

Try this out. You won’t regret it.. Story is amazing

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9mth
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Zusaku

i’ve already read the whole first book and was pleasantly surprised by the character development that the mc goes through, as well as the realistic behavior for most characters.

10mth
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AntiRoxas

This made me feel like i was watching "Major" for the first time again, just in text. Its fun and made me read everything in 2 days (300 chaps atm). If you like Sport novels thats the one you have to read. [img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

7mth
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ryan_biggins

I love baseball stories. This is one of my favorites. Usually would leave longer and more detailed review but I don’t want to spoil anything. Just read it and that’s telling enough. 10/10. Also author give me more chapters.

9mth
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WMROger
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Made me spend money after using this app for 6 years

9mth
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DaoistUEbGAB

bro i liked it lot probably one of best sports novel are i ever read the thing i liked most thet mc doesn't have so called overpowered system he also has work but i also feel you are inspired by hitting zone in many scenes ok but i can't read further because i am poor 😙😙🥲😗

8mth
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Mister_Robot

I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.

3mth
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Aria_sakti

Awesome book i like it and the characters are interesting

10mth
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Spencer_Boudrey

Please come out with a mass release! This story is great and I’m all caught up looking for more to read!!

9mth
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Nasser98

Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition. It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements. I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work

3mth
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Heroov
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I love baseball stories. This is one of my favorites. Usually would leave longer and more detailed review but I don’t want to spoil anything. Just read it and that’s telling enough. 10/10. Also author give me more chapters.

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8mth
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Riman424

I really love how this book starts with explaining where the character is at in his life and gives a good entrance into the story. Another thing I like about it is even though he went back to his younger self his injury didn't magically disappear just because of the system. But overall its a great story and I'm excited for the chapters to come and hope it continues being great.

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8mth
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Kristine_Caasi

Keep it Up! It is one of a kind books ..Got to read this!

7mth
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devourerxberserk

Love the work, Its good and am looking forward to more.

9mth
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Marina_Nenadic

It's a great story, I love to read it. Super!

6mth
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floridaman317

Great book, but should capture more of the dugout antics in baseball, like rally caps and stuff. There’s a bunch of videos on youtube of MLB players messing around in the dugout to get ideas from

9mth
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FictionalJack

This book is amazing, the writing and plot are outstanding. The way that the author weaves the words of his book and shows the feelings of the main character makes you feel apart of the story itself. Would definitely recommend this book to anyone.

9mth
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