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Summary: A Tarnished who has done this whole song and dance a million times before and has reached max level in every skill, starts up one last run. Why? To finally give every last one of his waifus the happy endings they deserve, of course. Told from the perspective of said waifus, as they all try to desperately get a handle on the Tarnished and his antics.

Give it a try and let me know what you think!

This story is already completed on all of my other websites. Posting it here, one update a day, to see how it does.

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Luke_James_5487

This story is where the incredible amount of practice at writing Cam gets with his commissions shines through, highly recommended. Has a really solid update rate that has been sustained consistently over a long period so you don't need to worry about him dropping the story either.

2yr
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SirSuicideSurvivor

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟SOOOOO GOOOOOOODD!!!! Will likely remain one of the best elden ring fanfictions even when were looking back 10 years from now. is therefore a potential timeless classic.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

2yr
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LaughingArkBuilder

You have great writing skills, that alone would've been enough for many of us readers... Yet your in-depth knowledge of the game and immersion towards the characters has made a masterpiece the majority. I can hardly wait to see how this goes.

2yr
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ReficulsRegret

the story was good the writing was good the only problem is the yuri towards the end kinda ruined it for me but everything else up to that was a good read

2yr
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Johnathon_Magus

First off the grammer is excellent in this novel. The update stability was good when releasing or at least I seen from other review’s. Charcter design not bad at all good description’s. The Backgroud of the lore for Elden Ring is superbly done. Now for the story which for me had it’s up’s and down’s overall. I’ll get the negative’s out of the way the women of the novel make conparison’s with their former spouses with the MC. Even one’s pressence being hinted to be affecting one of the harem girl’s. Giving those Cuck me vibes for the MC. He doesn’t save every girl in Elden Ring. Well those that are mentioned but never show up or do but die. Also some yuri vibes yeah take that what you will. Even personally wasn’t a fan every stinking time I’m thinking author really? At least have the MC present but no it’s at the end but two women go off and do their own thing. Hard Cuck vibes once again. If your expecting any tension in the story the MC is OP so enough said. His charcter can be a bit one dimensional being the silent MC. He’s not whiney like other MC’s so that’s a plus. His charcterization come’s from’s his expression’s which is either smile, shake’s head, and stare lol. The method’s he use’s to save the girl’s seem’s legit some at the same time I’m not so sure. The thing that really bugged me was the wedding and the dividing the women based off status. Not having them married all at once really ticked me off. Given it was a clear divide on who the MC was showing favoritism toward’s at least in my view. I felt each girl could have been fleshed out more and had more interaction’s with the MC. It felt rushed at times the romance and contrived. With some girl’s falling in love way too soon for my taste. Overall these my raw and honest thought’s on the novel. The postive is the aformentioned grammer,worldbuilding,and charcter design. Hope this helped anyone peace.

2yr
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Zizinho21

Disliked the yuri towards the end, almost ruined it for me but it's fiction and I can delete it from my own head cannon of the fic. If I do so 9/10

1yr
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Yuri_Cultivator

Came for the Plot, and stayed for the actual plot, who would've thought? I've been following Cam's great works through different platforms for a little while, so imagine my surprise when I was reading the summary and only out of the corner of my eye, see his name and found out he also had an account here? Honestly... now that I think about it while writing this review, it probably shouldn't have surprised me at all... Anyway, back to reviewing the actual work: Amazing, really. Solid and just consistent quality all over. Also, as someone who loves Elden Ring (well, DS games in general), the effort that he's put into it in terms of lore, and even making the more nonsensical or, as he likes to call them, "fill-in-the-blanks" things feel real and fitting... Is rather mind-blowing. I ate through the story in a day and a half, expecting it to be something for me to read on the side to just read something, but my word did it hook me. I can safely say that you have given me my Perfect Ending now, Cam. Exactly what I wished was possible for me to do in all those runs I've had and hundreds of hours looking for alternatives that even the mighty wikis don't know of, so for that, Thank you.

2yr
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alejandro_pizarro

naaa bastatnte entretenido mi hermano mi comi todos los capitulos en 1 dia assssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

2yr
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KamaCytra

Good fan fiction, really enjoyed it on QQ. Your first first fic that I read, now I'll be happy to look at the rest. I recommend reading, in our time there are not so many Elden Ring fanfictions, and this one is also quite well written [img=recommend]

2yr
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WeslenBR

eu li no fanfiction.net e é muito bom

2yr
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iamapsychopath

ive reas this several times, but now i gotta ask, will there be a part two for the dlc?

4mth
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Sir_talksalot_7934

you should do this be with skyrim lot of the girls they need olve

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1yr
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Yum_q327

I want to say a lot, but in short, thank you. Let's just exclude the fact that ff on this topic is like unicorns in real life. So we still have: A good pen, a small but existing humor, and a lemon and syrup in a dark world. Most importantly, the number of annoying things here is close to zero. The only drawback that could be is the lack of action scenes, but if you read this, you will understand that such scenes are not really needed here.

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2yr
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Kaito_Uzumaki

you know when I first added this story to my library, it was because I thought it was like your other ones. But while I go looking for gold I found Diamonds instead. This is the most wholesome story(Porn with plot)I have every read

2yr
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Chummy
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the novel and writing is good but for safety measures of my heart i stop reading and wanted ask, there's NTR? (Sorry For My Bad English) ╮(^▽^)╭

2yr
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MirukuTaku

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2yr
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Bii_Chu
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I see lots of text by you... which makes you maidenless. doh hohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohoho. but legit, good work on Maidenless No More.

2yr
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Lord_Mandalore

The Kenobi show sucks and you know it now Bwahahahahahahahahavagahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahavagahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

2yr
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Deox_HD

Love all your other stories and this one is just as amazing. literally instantly read the chapters when they came out. after the end instantly binged it again in one sitting.

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2yr
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