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Kapitel 64: Red Moon Rises

"Tonight, we celebrate the arrival of our brother and sister from the Southern tribe. And they have brought with them someone very special, someone whom many of us believed to have disappeared from the world until now… The AVATAR!"

Said a stern looking middle aged man with bright blue eyes, typical of the Water Tribes, dark brown hair tied and stylized in a tribal way and wearing long blue robes with white fur around his collar.

After a loud round of applause and cheers he continues.

"We also celebrate my daughter's sixteenth birthday. Princess Yue is now of marrying age!" he concluded while gesturing to a white-haired young woman.

"Thank you, Father. May the great Ocean and Moon Spirits watch over us during these troubled times!" Yue said with a calm and composed expression.

Giving a curt nod to his daughter, the chief then gestured to two young men led by another stern old man, this one with white hair, who was standing by. "Now, Master Pakku and his students will perform!"

As Pakku and his two students bent significant blobs of water, they captivated Aang and Katara. They merged the three blobs into one stream, bending it around each other.

While Aang and Katara were enamored by the "classy" waterbending techniques, Sokka was enamored by something… or someone… else….

"Hi there. Sokka. Southern Water Tribe." Said the teen, giving his typical grin and raising an eyebrow.

"Very nice to meet you." Answered Yue, smiling and bowing slightly.

The two of them shared an awkward silence for a moment until nervously Sokka decided to take the lead in their conversation;

"So… uhhh…. You're a princess. Huh? You know…. Back in my tribe I'm kind of like a prince myself…" The poor sod's rizz would work… possibly… if his sister wasn't nearby to counter it…

"Ha!" Katara interrupted, "Prince of what, exactly?"

"A lot of things!" Sokka shouted in exasperation. Can't his sister work for his benefit once in her life?! "Do you mind? I'm trying to have a conversation here…."

"My apologies, Prince Sokka." Katara responded, with very obvious sarcasm.

As Sokka tried and failed to level up his rizz and speech skill tree to score a Northern Princess while being sabotaged by his own sister, Chief Arnook and Pakku were having a talk; 

"Master Pakku, meet your newest student, the Avatar" Arnook said, with Aang bowing to the master.

"Just because you're destined to save the world, don't expect any special treatment" Pakku said, his memory of Madara and Kaliya were still vivid in his mind, as well as Madara's illusion that made him have nightmares for weeks.

Comparing him… the Avatar feels… unpolished… and that's being polite, the boy in front of him didn't seem to have what it takes to end the war, hell he was more excited about the sight of the city and the food than talking to him… but again… he had been wrong before…

"My friend and I can't wait to start training with you! After we relax for a couple of days." Replied the Avatar with a big grin.

'A couple of days he says...' the old Master frowned. "If you want to relax, then I suggest visiting a tropical island. If not, I'll see you both at sunrise. Good night."

The next day at dawn, Aang and Katara finally made it to the place where Chief Arnook told the Avatar to meet Pakku.

"I've waited for this my whole life," Said Katara excitedly "I finally get to learn from a real waterbending Master!"

Aang nodded with his huge toothy smile as they turned to Pakkyu who was busy bending a stream of water. "Good morning, Master Pakku."

The old man dropped the water and spoke in an annoyed tone "No, please, march right in. I'm not concentrating or anything…"

"Uhhh… this is my friend… Katara. The one I told you about…"

"I'm sorry. I think there's been a misunderstanding. You didn't tell me your friend was a girl. In our tribe, it is forbidden for women to learn waterbending." Answered Pakku.

Angrily Katara shouted "What do you mean you won't teach me? I didn't travel across the entire world so you could tell me no!"

Pakku stared at her for a second 'childish and entitled, just because she made her way up here, she believes she has the right to demand my knowledge and skills… a far cry from you, Kaliya…'

"No." he said with a bored tone.

"But there must be other female waterbenders in your tribe!" said Katara.

"Here, the women learn from Yagoda to use their waterbending to heal. I'm sure she would be happy to take you as her student, despite your bad attitude."

"I don't want to heal; I want to fight!"

"I can see that. But our tribe has customs, rules."

"Well… your rules STINK!" 

Aang was also angry "Yeah, they're not fair! If you won't teach Katara then…"

Pakku could only stare at the bald boy with a bit of disappointment "Then what?"

"Then I won't learn from you!" the young Airbender shouted, as if it was the ultimate threat.

'Foolish boy… at least that Firebender had the guts to stare me in the eye and make me feel fear, Kaliya at least had the guts to challenge me to prove her point… these two are just… disappointing…'

"Well, have fun teaching yourself then, I'm sure you'll do a great job."

"Wait! Aang didn't mean that!" Shouted the Southern Water Tribe girl right before running towards the fuming Avatar that was already leaving.

'To think that the girl is less of a fool than the Avatar… how disappointing indeed…'

Approaching the bald boy, Katara grabbed his shoulders "You can't risk your training for me. You have to learn from Master Pakku…. Even if he is a big jerk..." she said the final part while stealing glances at the old Master. It's not that he didn't notice or hear it, he simply didn't care.

Aang tried to argue but Katara stared at him as a mother would stare at her misbehaving child, which for some reason made Aang agree with her point of view real quick…

As Aang approached back towards the old Master he was blasted away with a stream of water, making him sprawl on the icy floor of the training platform.

"Why are you laying down already? We barely started… "

Hours passed. Aang was beaten a lot, Sokka was embarrassed a lot, and Katara learned a lot, healing was as bad as she thought and she could see how useful it could be to the team… but she still wanted to fight… the necklace background and also Kanna… or, as many knew her as, Gran-Gran...

Aang then decided to do a more clandestine move that night after the gang talked about their day, he went out of his way to try to teach Katara what Pakku taught him, which didn't end well for the Avatar boy… which led to the current events outside of the main palace of Agna Qel'a.

"Are you crazy, Katara? You're not going to win this fight!" said Sokka worriedly.

"I don't care!" Responded the fuming girl while removing her coat.

"You don't have to do this for me. I can find another teacher!" Said Aang, feeling guilty.

"I'm not doing it for you! Someone needs to slap some sense into that guy!" Katara said as she saw Pakku coming down from the palace; "So, you decided to show up?"

But contrary to her expectations… the old man simply walked away

"Aren't you going to fight?!" the angry Katara asked

"Go back to the healing huts with the other women where you belong-" Before he could continue talking, whips of water were sent towards him, to which he dodged easily.

"I see…. Fine. You want to learn to fight so bad? Study closely then!" the old Master bent two streams of water from nearby pools and sent them both at a charging Katara.

The impact made the girl fall back while the old master joined the two streams together. Encircling both Katara and himself in a forceful ring of water "Don't worry, I'm not going to hurt you."

The fight continued with Katara trying every trick she learned on her way here, she used every trick she managed to learn from the scroll as well, but all of that merely made the old Pakku raise an eyebrow and continue blasting her with water until she was trapped.

The curtains closed as Team Avatar finally learned about Pakku and Kanna's engagement, and after a long drawn out drama, Pakku finally decided to accept the girl as his student.

'Perhaps… Perhaps you were right all along… Kaliya'

Thought the old man as he walked back to his residence.

For the next few days, both Aang and Katara joined Pakku at the training grounds, Sokka tried to woo Yue, which would've worked easily before she met Madara.

Did she have feelings for Madara? No… not quite, but the point is… the fact that Madara supplied her with the excitement she didn't know she needed from the outside world, which would make Sokka's endeavor significantly more challenging since he wasn't the first 'outsider' that she met.

To be fair, most of Madara's stories about the outside world were a bit more exciting than Sokka's, with the one exception being the Fire Nation Avatar Temple, but even that was just on par with Madara's tales.

The poor guy didn't even have a chance in that. What could Sokka possibly talk about that would be more exciting than a gigantic hidden library that existed since the dawn of humanity, guided by an equally old and wise Owl spirit? To her? That values spirits and worshiped them as divines? ... NOTHING!

Not that Sokka didn't have a chance… It was just that different from canon… he wasn't meeting sheltered and easily impressionable girls… both Suki and Yue had their horizons expanded before meeting him, so now he had to do more than just being charming and funny... he had to be… impressive… which he wasn't yet, but, who knows about in the future?

The fun days came to an end abruptly though, once Sokka spotted the soot, also known as 'Black Snow', that was known to precede a Fire Nation attack. He knew the time had come… The fire nation was there, and this time he felt it would be war.

To make things even worse for Sokka, he also met his rival in romance, a tall handsome young warrior named Hahn, but that drama was short-lived… no drama needed while having the Northern Water Tribe be capital sieged by fireballs after all.

The attack was easily put on hold due to the full moon shining brightly in the sky, which gave Team Avatar the time needed to parlay with Tui and La at the spirit Oasis, unfortunately for them… Zuko managed to steal the Avatar away.

On the streets of Agna Qel'a, the battle was bloody, things that the TV series didn't show, such as the waterbenders using sharp ice to cut and pierce or simply drowning Fire Nation soldiers with their bending, while the firebenders would burn people on their path mercilessly.

With people dying left and right on both sides, the Fire Nation was being pushed back, the Full Moon was no joke and doubled the waterbenders output. Although extremely mild when compared to the Sozin's Comet enhancement, one must not forget the high quantity of waterbenders and the home advantage, everything in Agna Qel'a was made of ice... everything was a weapon under their disposal here.

The fighting was getting more and more chaotic and bloody from both sides until suddenly… the Moon turned red.

"I am… a legend now!" a middle-aged man with sideburns grinned pridefully while holding a bag above a small pond, surrounded by lush green vegetation. "The Fire Nation will, for generations, tell stories about the great Zhao, who darkened the moon! They will call me, Zhao the Conqueror, Zhao the Moon Slayer, Zhao the Invincible!" He shouts in excitement, finally… FINALLY… he achieved something great after so many defeats over the years!

While the Admiral was daydreaming about the fame and glory he would earn under his name, Team Avatar approached them and the fire nation soldiers behind Zhao positioned themselves to fight.

"Don't!" Said Aang while lifting his arms in a surrendering motion, one could see him and Sokka bruised, the southern young man was even limping. If it wasn't for the full moon helping Katara, they would have been captured by Zuko then and there, even Katara was breathing hard with many scorched marks on her tunic.

"It's my destiny, to destroy the Moon and the Water Tribe!" Said the Admiral in glee.

"Destroying the Moon won't hurt just the Water Tribe… It will hurt everyone, including you. Without the Moon, everything would fall out of balance. You have no idea what kind of chaos that would unleash on the world." Aang tried his best.

"He is right Zhao" An old yet stern voice came from the side

"General Iroh, why am I not surprised to discover your treachery?" Zhao responded while looking towards the hooded newcomer.

"I'm no traitor Zhao. The Fire Nation needs the Moon too, we all depend on the balance!" Said the old general with a serious expression, taking his firebending stance "Whatever you do to that spirit I'll unleash on you tenfold. Let it go. NOW!" 

Zhao even recoiled a bit in fear while looking at Iroh, he never saw the old general this serious before, that look in Iroh's eyes was telling him that the old general would aim for the kill the moment he attacked the spirit.

The Admiral's hands trembled; he was frustrated. Everything seemed to be working against him. He failed his mission in the swamp several years ago, he failed to capture the Avatar with the best archers in the world, he failed to capture the Prince to gain the Fire Lord's favor…

Even when he got promoted, the one spark of victory he had in the last decade of his life, he didn't feel like he achieved anything… no… he wanted to show that he was superior, he was worthy… his name should be a legend… 

'I will show them all!'

The slight pause already showed a difference from canon, Zhao didn't crouch down to release the spirit, no… under the red moonlight time seemed to slow down as his right hand ignited in flames, aiming for the bag held by his left hand.

Aang, Katara, Yue, Iroh, Sokka… everyone's eyes went wide at the sheer craziness of Zhao's move, they all wanted to move and stop it, but it was too sudden! Even Iroh, who was somewhat prepared, knew that even if he blasted his fire towards Zhao now it would be too late.

They could only watch Zhao's crazy smile in horror, as the Admiral's flames slowly drew closer to the Moon spirit.

As the flames drew closer, a black shadow seemed to rush in front of Zhao, inches before the flames consumed the almighty spirit fish.

A loud CLANK sound echoed throughout the oasis, drawing everyone's attention to the weirdly shaped fan, upside-down and halfway sunk into the earth leaving a trail on the pristine grass, while a man with a wild, long black hair, black clothes underneath crimson armor and red eyes that seemed to reflect the red moon above stood on top of the fan, with one foot on top of the tip of the handle while the other was on the lower part of the fan, in a Sasori style stance.

On his right hand a bloodied scythe could be seen, while his left hand held the bag carrying the moon spirit…. And… a severed arm?!

"It's been a while… Little Zhao… we finally meet again…"

What followed was a scream of pain and agony 

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!"


AUTORENGEDANKEN
KojiSan KojiSan

Hello there! i came here to close 2023 with a golden curtain!

Thank you all for your patience my friends, many things happened the past 2 months.

Our family had a serious scare with a possible disease that my wife could've had... luckly she doesnt! but it took a long time to figure it out and we were all dreading.

On top of that, on the day of the good results, we also adopted a new cat! he was meowing outside and he is just a little kitten, a very mischeivous kitten, but a lovable one!

We named him Ace, and nowi have to worry about my frail things... because the little bastard doesnt calm down!

I wish you all a great 2024, you are all great, and i hope to see you all next year for the continuation of the fanfiction.

Im sorry for the delay again, but i do this for hobby not for money so yeah x-x i write when inspired AND have available time...

Cheers you lovable bastards!

next chapter

Kapitel 65: Distress

[The music i was listening while writing this was Naruto Shippuuden OST: Emergence of Talents, one of my all time favorites, so i totally recommend!]

Holding a bloody severed arm, Madara kept staring at Zhao straight in the eyes, part of him was feeling the thrill of revenge, while the other was incredibly disappointed. The foe of years past is a threat no more…

One of the firebender soldiers recovered faster than the others and charged towards Madara, who didn't even bat an eye and just said;

"Jackie"

From above, a man with long hair tied into a low ponytail appeared, doing an axe kick that instantly hit the back of the neck of the poor soldier, a loud CRACK sound could be heard as the soldier fell on the floor, gone.

He scanned the scared faces of everyone in the vicinity, as a loud sound came from above.

Looking up, everyone saw a large black colored airship hovering dangerously close to the city's buildings, drifting through the air while making the hair and clothes of everyone fly up with the wind that the turbines generated;

Tossing the scythe on the ground, with his long mane flowing wildly with the wind, Madara turned to the nearby living Fire Nation soldier. 

He appeared in front of the poor fella like a ghost and simply pointed the index finger of his free hand against the chest area of the soldier's armor, then spoke softly with an emotionless tone;

"Since you are all here lined up properly… let me test my newest move…."

Lightning crackled around his hand as he took a soft breath and stared deep into the soldier's eyes;

"…Chain Lightning…"

Static instantly built up as the crackling of lightning used the poor soldier to suddenly jump from him towards the next one, then the next one… and then the one after that…

With uncanny and inhuman control, the lightning avoided any 'friendly fire' and targeted only the eight standing soldiers that accompanied Zhao to this place. Madara also made sure to avoid Zhao with this killer move.

Team Avatar and Yue were horrified to see a small team of elite firebenders instantly drop to the ground, spasming, after a single second.

Iroh on the other hand was impressed, he instantly guessed how Madara managed to do such a move, using each target as a lightning rod guiding the lightning through their hearts and then using their own chi to supply the jump to the next target.

In his eyes, Madara's creativity was on par with his own, but instead waterbending as a base to create a technique, Madara decided to employ earthbending instead, turning anyone in the vicinity as a possible lightning generator

What shocked him, though, was the control. It's not humanly possible to see chi or how it moved, so how did Madara do it? He could only guess that it was related to those red eyes. It was called 'Lightning Generation' instead of 'Lightningbending' for a reason, one can't bend lightning, its too wild and dangerous… yet… somehow… Madara did it...

What no one noticed is that every time the lightning moved, the finger touching the first soldier's chest moved by a millimeter, either up, down, sideways or even twisting the angle a little bit… all possible because of the ultimate cheat called Sharingan.

Not long after that another person dropped from above, right before the airship drifted into the air and moved towards the wall.

This time a tall, strong and voluptuous woman with clear Water Tribe traits landed nearby.

Sokka could only let out a loud GULP sound as he stared at Kaliya's…. eyes…. Yeah… 100%....

Yue who was right beside him narrowed her eyes towards the self-proclaimed "Southern Water Tribe Prince" and sneered.

After everyone was downed and Zhao was still clutching his bloody stump, Madara raised the bag in his other hand.

"It seems that you owe me big time now… Tui…" he couldn't help but grin, there was nothing more gratifying than a well thought out and perfectly executed plan, he could feel the fish's movements inside the bag becoming more calm and less chaotic, as if she accepted it… Good…

As the tall hot woman approached Madara, he extended his hand, handing her the bag attached to the severed arm.

"You take care of it Kaliya. Jackie, defend the perimeter around the Oasis. I don't want a single Fire Nation soldier in here. Kaliya, after you are done with Tui, you join me on the streets… We have a battle to win." 

Under the red moonlight, Madara moved his hand in a fast motion, launching a kunai towards his war fan.

And with a single pull, as if by magic, the huge fan "yoinks itself" from the ground and flies towards Madara's stretched hand.

"General Iroh, I wish our meeting would've been during more… fortunate… circumstances…"

Iroh, who was already relieved that someone managed to stop Zhao before he erased the moon, couldn't help but smile. "Ah, such circumstances seem to disagree with my old age. I wonder if we could meet again at your resort for some good tea, to wash away the sourness of this current encounter."

Contrary to his expectations however, Madara frowned a bit, before forcing a smile. "Give us a few weeks…. Let's just say that a lot happened…"

Iroh then remembered the fire storm that happened while they were on their way here and he simply nodded while saying "I see."

"Now…" Said Madara while turning his head towards the amputee Admiral "… I think we have some unfinished business, right… Admiral?"

As he was walking towards his target, the Avatar finally managed to react;

"Wait!" Shouted the boy.

"Hm?" Madara merely glanced at him as he finally stood in front of Zhao. "We shall talk later, Avatar."

Katara, who was the only one not really physically beaten, took initiative to ask;

"Are you friend or enemy?" 

She never in her life saw anyone manipulating lightning, that single 'Chain Lightning' scared her shitless but, not only that, this man was scary… he severed someone's arm without blinking, to someone like her… he was cold-blooded… and those abnormal red eyes only made things worse.

Ignoring the girl, Madara simply grabbed Zhao by his throat, like a chicken, and suddenly jumped several feet in the air while using firebending on his feet to launch himself up.

After Madara left, the Moon slowly went back to normal.

Turning around, the group saw Kaliya gently releasing the white koi fish into the pond. With the red tint of the Moon finally lifted, Team Avatar could finally see the new arrivals properly.

"So… Uh…. Hello?" Said Aang with an awkward smile towards the newcomers. 

His first impressions were mixed. Madara scared him shitless, Kaliya gave him a neutral feeling, and Lei gave him a friendly, welcoming vibe. It was weird for the bald boy.

Lei, staring at the Avatar, couldn't help but raise an eyebrow "Oh! So, you are the Avatar, huh? Well, it's a pleasure to meet you!" He said while giving a respectful bow.

"This little one is the Avatar?" Kaliya, after releasing Tui, approached Lei and the 'gaang'.

"Ahem…" Wasting no time, Sokka took charge "Who are you people? What are you doing here?" he said while moving slightly between them and Yue.

"I wish to know that as well" Added Katara with narrowed eyes, she didn't like being ignored by Madara one bit!

Both Kaliya and Lei stared at one another, each with a raised eyebrow 'What kind of bullshit have these kids been fed until now to believe that they are entitled to demand answers?!'

But before they could tell Team Avatar how far up their rectum they could shove their interrogation, Yue came in clutch;

"Kaliya!" She shouted in excitement, which earned her a smirk from the voluptuous waterbender.

"Look at that… The little Princess grew up fine indeed, the white hair seems to fit ye" Kaliya said as she moved closer to the younger Northerner girl.

"Do you know each other?" Asked Aang, completely clueless, he still hadn't registered everything that happened.

"Wait a minute… you said KALIYA?!" Katara couldn't help herself here.

"Who's Kaliya?" Asked a confused Sokka … Listen... It's been a long trip here with a lot of ups, downs, and downs and more downs… Cut the guy some slack, ok?

"Really? You don't remember? She made the Waterbender Scroll!" Said Katara with an annoyed tone as she stared daggers at her brother, who simply shrugged and ignored the information.

"Yes?" Kaliya raised an eyebrow

"I… I have your Scroll…" Said Katara a bit embarrassed

"Ohhh…. Well, ye are lucky, I guess…" Kaliya simply shrugged, not much differently from Sokka's behavior.

Turning towards Lei, she added "Jackie, ye will stay here with the kids right? Then I'll be going… Gotta remove some Fire Nation stains from me homeland."

After that, she ran towards the water surrounding the oasis, and after turning the water into a small maelstrom, she launched herself up, following Madara's speed.

An awkward silence remained

"So… uh…. Have you… Ever tried to ride an Otter Penguin?" Aang could only be Aang.

And poor Jackie could only raise an eyebrow as he stared at the weird Avatar boy in front of him "What?"

"No-nothing… forget about it…" 

"Ah, Mr. Lei, it's been a while! How have you been?" An old, but quite happy voice came from the side, but said voice made Team Avatar react, quickly assuming defensive stances, ready for a fight.

"Ah! Mr. Iroh!" Said Lei with a huge smile as he turned towards the old General. "It's been a while… sadly some things happened… but luckily we arrived in time..."

"WAIT! So, you two are on the same side?!" Shouted Sokka, already pulling out his boomerang, ready to fight.

""Sigh"" both Lei and Iroh couldn't help but sigh, and even had the same thought..

'… kids…'

At the same time, on top of the walls of Agna Qel'a, over a hundred feet above the city, overseeing the ice-cold sea of the Northern Pole and enjoying the sight of dozens of Fire Nation warships, two people stood.

One with his arms crossed in front of his crimson armor, while the other on his knees, with an expression of pain as what was left of his right arm kept bleeding.

"… You will regret this… Ghost…" said the kneeling man.

"I disagree" Answered the armored young man with an emotionless tone, till this day he still hadn't recovered from what happened in the resort, he was doing his damn best to not go on a wild slaughter, destroying Agna Qel'a from the map… luckily Pakku was busy somewhere and didn't cross paths with him.

"The Fire Nation… will destroy everything you have… you … you are done!" Said the Admiral with spite and pain.

"Mhm…" Madara said only that, while he kept staring at the warships on the horizon;

"What… What are you staring at? Afraid of our mighty Navy?!" 

"Mhm…" Was all that Madara said, again, with the same neutral and bored tone "… Keep watching…"

"Watching wha-" Before the Admiral could properly ask, he could see the five huge flagships as well as another ten big ships turning around one after the other, slowly retreating from the battlefield, leaving only the small ones behind

Doesn't seem a lot? Well Zhao did lose a lot of ships due to Madara's firestorm several days ago, not only that Aang also did his best to destroy all closest ships with his bending before Madara got here.

"WHAT… WHAT ARE THEY DOING?! THAT'S MY FLAGSHIP!"

As the Admiral kept shouting in anger for minutes on end, his strength leaving him by the second, he could barely see straight as the blood loss started hitting him hard, one would think that he could cauterize the wound with his firebending, but that's no flesh wound, it's a freaking severed limb… not only that, the blood loss was taking its toll.

"Any minute now…" Said Madara.

Zhao didn't even have enough energy to ask anymore, he could only stare as the remaining ships went BOOOOOOOOM.

"You know Zhao… That day that I exploded your ship on the Fire Nation blockade gave me many insights into how… fragile… your ships really are…"

"Y-you…"

"You didn't think you were simply so unlucky that lightning decided to aim straight towards your ship, right? No… It was me… and I've got to say… I have pretty good aim, don't you agree?"

Grabbing Zhao by the collar of his armor, Madara brought him to the edge of the wall, holding him dangling from the edge.

"You almost had me back then, you know? If you hadn't run away like a coward, you could've had me killed… Now it's payback time, and I leave no loose ends… but I appreciate the ships you donated to me, I will take care of them… don't worry… "

Zhao could only watch in horror and resignation as Madara let go of his armor, he could feel the wind blowing against his back as he fell from over a hundred feet towards the frosty Northern sea. 

In his field of vision, he could see both Madara and the edge of the wall getting farther and farther away… yet those inhuman red eyes were always staring at him… like a hawk... no… like a bloodthirsty predator... until the very end…

There was no more pain in his severed arm, there was no more fear of Madara, there was no more respect towards the Fire Lord and there was no more cruelty towards Zuko, during his final moments all that Zhao could feel was… Distress…


AUTORENGEDANKEN
KojiSan KojiSan

Hello there! the first chapter of the year! hurray!!!!

(Well it is for me >_>...)

So yeah, i wouldn't leave yall hanging... how could yall

possibly worry about that?! Don't yall know me, your favorite Author?!

Well i am obviously happy to come back to writing, i shall post a picture of Ace on the comments, because that little menace deserves his spotlight >_> ...

The OG Book 1: Water finally ended here, anticlimactic? well a bit... but i wanted to show how far Madara has come in terms of strength. Different from many other works in the platform, the enemies wont level up to follow Madara's power scale. The difference from the 11 year old Madara and the 18 year old Madara was the main goal of the chapter, both in terms of power, demeanor and maturity/mentality.

There will be chapters of events happened between Book Water and Book Earth, i need to tie some knots of the story after all. it wont simply jump from the end of the Siege of Agna Qel'a to the group flying over the Earth Kingdom... >_>

And yes, Red Cloud and Team Avatar finally meet... and Red Cloud members are not impressed... i mean how could they, right? the Gaang is but a bunch of kids.

No, chain lightning isnt Madara's "New Bending" it's just that with the help of the Sharingan he can do more than just zap people from distance, and he will get creative with that... NO CHIDORI THOUGH!

Other than that, if yall wanna join the discord, ask in the comments, my wife shall send you the link, we dont want to spam it so if no one request, we won't be sending XD but you can always ask

Have a great day, now i shall try to write the next chapter, i've been rather inspired today for some reason...

Stay awesome, you wonderful sausages!

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