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Long Time
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Love I've read your story till chapter 6 and I notice a lot of spelling error and the development of the story I would say it's ok. But really hope you could improve from grammar mistakes wise.
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In the Laterr Chapters there are a lot of fights and Jacob is going to be Sara's friend. It is a slight glimpse of every college love story and friendship. Its good way to pass the time as well
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Do write frequently and some long chapters would do much better. Thank You for entertaining us home, I hope you are safe at home. I like the love story of Sara and Jacob, and Friendship between Sara and Lisa.