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This is a dark story you've been warned.
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A soul was called upon by a god to become his believer, watch as this soul reincarnates into a new world and does whatever he pleases and enjoys his life to the fullest

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I dont have a discord, the artist's signature is on the cover I dont own it. I dont get paid for this so dont expect frequent chapters I am simply doing this because I wanted too, not to mention I have uni so i dont have much time

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#harem(it's dxd), #dark, #evil mc, #no yuri, #netori(not ntr), #reincarnation, #system, #level up, #manipulation

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I made these long ago and am not really active but if you want to give a buck or two I wont complain lol
ko-fi.com/that1otakudude31
patreon.com/That1OtakuDude

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Daoist890597

So the MC has managed to unlock a broken skill like 'Absolute Hypnosis' that will ruin the story for good? The gamer system itself is already bad enough, and the story won't be interesting for long before it loses its charm.

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That1OtakuDude

Shameless self promotion. this is not the classic goody two shoes protagonist. I intentionally made him just the average Joe in terms of having a shitty life but not horrible to the point of like becoming and underground mafia or something. as for his decisions in the story well he definitely has his desires and will achieve them even at the costs of others happiness but that doesn't mean he has no feelings he's just selfish he's human, or well a devil. anyways if you want to stick around for it go ahead if you don't we'll just go, only give actual constructive criticism if it's just some hate comment simply because you don't like the mc or his skills I'll just delete the comment

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by_you
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pretty promising stories, i hope you have a stable update my friend. :)

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Chaddts

Bad. The first three chapters are monologs with very little world building. Nothing is explained either, assuming the readers already knows stuff specifically whatever the template character is. This should have been explained before he even reincarnated. Constant misspellings, and the Mc knows things, he just shouldn't know at all, and we as the readers aren't shown how he learns what he does learn it's simply stated and told to us vs being shown. Tldr: low quality writing with constant errors, and an abundance of telling vs showing, and the telling doesn't even do a good job.

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Kosmostars

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arjun_padewar

excellent story ......,.......,..

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