Isekai in Hajime no Ippo with Gaolang’s Template

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Passerby_Venne

I was really excited for a Hajime no Ippo fanfic, however this story has a major flaw. by now, the webnovel culture should be familiar to most readers, and everyone should have heard about the "Bob Uchiha" effect. it's when author gives really abd names that doesn't fit the world or story. this is one of those stories, and it totally breaks immersion and makes it hard to read. The first chapter was good but couldn't read more than that because the MC is the brother of Ippo and his name is Alex Makunouchi.... just give him any generic Japanese name, and that would be okay, even something like Toyota Makunouchi is better than Alex. I think we as readers shouldn't accept this mistake and refuse to read until the author corrects this. when webnovel was new, these types of mistakes could be accepted but by now, after many years, everyone knows about the Bob Uchiha effect, and it should no longer be tolerated. Author, your story really seems good, so please fix this!

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Lucius_Frey

Not the worst thing I’ve ever started. It’s worth an attempt at reading, I just couldn’t get past the MCs personality. Incredible cockiness and arrogance even when he is bad a something. The English name when his character background shouldn’t have it shows this is a casual write without too much thought put behind it(which is fine) but not what I’m here for. Hope the author keeps writing since writing with a plan and writing without one makes a huge difference. I did the same with my first one when I wrote without thinking and didn’t know where to take it when it got some popularity.

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The_Envious_One

Idk why a lot of ppl are hating on this fic, some people say the name doesn’t fit when it doesn’t really matter and his parents aren’t both Japanese his mom was Irish so it actually could happen they also say his attitude and that he’s arrogant when .. bro with the template he has I would be arrogant too why would I read a fanfic to read another ippo being honest and boring and also being arrogant is the best way to get known in sports like fighting cause everyone wants to see you lose after you talk smack you can tell he’s not actually a bad person when he talks about how he want to make life better for his aunt. I just hope the author doesn’t drop cause a lot of authors are scared to make fanfics on hajime no ippo due to how long and how much info they need to process and there aren’t a lot on the app im happy with this.

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OussamaHachoum

I really like Hajime No Ippo, I'm glad you're doing this fanfic as it's making me entertained. It's really good and I really like the MC since his personality is really refreshing when comparing to some

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JustToMeme

Ngl, i read a few chapters and i think im gonna drop it. It's not bad, it just feels so redundant, the mc also is a cocky guy, the fights also feel dull. The name sucks too, alex lol. couldve just given him something generic.

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octoberwind

I like the story so far the pace is good the cheat is creative and there’s very few ippo fanfics on here so it gets five stars just for that thank you

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Haku_Ouroboros

no name raw??? 1 star 🤷🏻‍♂️. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Demons_Ki

your cooking right now not going to lie.10/5 star's [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Gringee

Great fic, mc is his cousin background isn’t established yet so leaves room for creativity. I like the template some might think it’s a bit much for this verse but there’s some monsters in HnI. Excited to see this complete.

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Lizrock

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lupex034

this made me cry inside

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Tyson66667

oh man your story is off to very good start and I can't wait to see what you do with it in the future. I believe it is going to be interesting.👑👑

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Boxing78

Just for this fanfic being a hajime no ippo one should qualify it for a 5 star rating, but the story is also very good so far. Keep up the great work🎉🎉🎉

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akzhol04

There is potential but the execution leaves much to be desired, The most annoying thing is the short descriptive chapters, everything happens too fast, as if it was done with artificial intelligence

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Theboxer

I hope this novel doesn't fall, I hope it doesn't imitate others who didn't finish the novel, I hope it continues until it is completed, can anyone recommend a novel like Words of Adventure

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ThinDeer

It’s been a while since I read anything good/interesting, so as a loyal reader all I can say is Ignore the bad comments and keep posting chapters and keep up the good work.

HNI is on of my favourite anime. Thanks for writing a fan-fic on it..It give a chance to enjoy this masterpiece on deferment prospective... Keep up the good work

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HyeChoii

I really like it. It has its flaws, most of which can be fixed through editing. The story is about boxing (Hajime no Ippo), which is a rare find on the website. The pacing is a little fast, though I would say that overall, it's an enjoyable read for a fanfiction.

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