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Is it wrong to be a Shrine Maiden Kitsune in a Dungeon?
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When you drink in a bar with your co-workers, don't just talk to a random stranger about your preferred waifu materials. or else, you might end up turning one of them in your next life..tehe
The story involves many anime reference from different anime.
The story is a genderbend reincarnation (male to female reincarnation) so if you are not a fan of that, please leave in your own discretion.
NOTE: I don't own the original version the character in the story and I am just using them as characters for my fanfic
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I don't want to be shameless to myself, but I really deserve a pat on the back for trying so hard to write a fanfic. I may not be a professional writer, but I am a writer nonetheless. I am starting to understand some writing techniques and hoping to refine my skill in the future.
I'd say this a good story, though the updates are a bit irregular, some parts are a bit cringe worthy(that could be fixed with a few words or if the order was changed), not really sure about character development, but so far so good. I recommend this FF. Not perfect, but not bad either. First, technically 6 chapters and it's not bad.
right i only got to a certain point before i had to give up. first of it is one of those novels that is suportive of child abuse cause of course it is not the abusers fault as the abuser had some reason to be angry and just needed to went. several people in the novel reapeatedly tells mc it is bad to be mad at abusive people... at least the novel eventualy shows that hey maybe you should not have trusted your abusive father as he will betray you and sell you to a molester. but yeah that does not change the fact that the writing seams to be very supportive of abusers. secound off the memories of both original lives gets sealed away originaly due to issues with the soul merging and eventualy because feeling mad about abuse is bad somehow. she eventualy starts picking up some slight tidbits of information, but anyways this is in no way a transmigration novel up to the point i read. furthermore at least until chapter 18 and likely more do not expect the story to actually start which might have been fine if the writing up until then had been at all enjoyable. furthermore the fact that that is half the novel before it was dropped tells you it was a bad call anyways. i usually do not bother writing bad reviews as i do not want to destroy any authors will to write as they may eventually get better. but aperantly i draw the line at novels that suport childabuse under the guise of "pacifism" a word it honestly seams the author has no understanding off. pacifism does not require you to feel no negative emotions, it does not require you to accept abuse and to not even try to find a way out of it when there are in fact several pocible peacefull aproches. heck most pacificts also tend to be perfectly happy with the fact that people get jailsentences if they did something bad, so i have no idea where this forgive bad people who feel no guilt and has recived no punishment is coming from.
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it's good but ultimate it is too early to judge it properly but I like the mc and the father but I feel it is a bit rushed but that is understandable considering it is a fanfiction that has not yet got to the fanfictiony bits yet the only thing that sticks out to me as really rushed or forced would be the conflict about some food or something and how the father who was acting very close to his daughter didn't even give her a chance to explain her self and he just gave her to someone else and he ask his dead wife where he went wrong like idk maybe giving someone else your daughter might be a good point overall its good I just hope the author stays away from all this unnecessary drama that doesn't make much sense as I said tho it is good and I only was negative about this part of the story cuz that the only really bad part
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Nice fanfic! Decent writing but [Vol 2:20] improved a little bit. of course the conflict with MC's father maybe a bit confusing but okay. よくできました！
I don't get this whole genderbent thing, I would just make them a woman who reincarnates, but story is good so 🤷