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What would happen if a man were to be transmigrated with nothing but the clothes on his back into the dangerous world of One Piece? No cheats whatsoever other than his knowledge of the plot.
The MC of the story is a ruthless man, a real pirate, so do expect a lot of killing.
This is a heavily edited translation work.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionSo MC will be having barrier devil Fruit heh, interesting, btw will Nami and her sister Nojiko be part of his Harem.?
The MC is mentally unwell, like Schizophrenia levels of unwell, its ment to be something to do with comedy, I guess? but my mother suffered from Schizophrenia, so I know a little of this subject, the MC is simply a physiopath, he just goes around killing people. Idk how it's fun to read about someone that , should clearly be Put In a mental hospital.
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the proposal is interesting, but the protagonist really did a poor job, there are so many ways to get power in one piece, does he soon choose the route of wanting easy power? The protagonist is a bit crazy and has anger issues,he wouldn't survive long in the pirate world. It reminded me of the kid, his way of being desperate.
5 stars for the author who edited this and cleaned up the story to make it readable for ordinary mortals. .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is translated pretty well and had a lot of work put it The story has a bumpy beginning to me but it improves later on
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I really enjoyed this story. Make sure you don't drop this, Author. A rushed ending is still better than a dropped one.
the story and the plot itself is good. It's just the mc is beyond silly and stupid like the author-san described. MC is suffering extremely retardation.
It's not bad for your first fic, but it still has a long way to go. First of all, everything you do is already sufficiently exploited, so you have to make the protagonist more charismatic or at least control his mood swings.
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the proposal is interesting, but the protagonist really did a poor job, there are so many ways to get power in one piece, does he soon choose the route of wanting easy power? The protagonist is a bit crazy and has anger issues,he wouldn't survive long in the pirate world. It reminded me of the kid, his way of being desperate.