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I will finally embark on the road of no return called hero
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(hey this story isn't mine just translating)
This is a time when gods did exist, yes this is ...... Greece!
God wilfully squandered his rights, as long as good-looking men and women regardless.
This is Greece!
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It's got a decent story premise, but the amount of things wrong with this work could fill an essay. there are multiple breaks in the work that make it very obvious that this was written out using talk to text, chat GPT, and other tools of the like, which isn't inherently bad but it wasn't edited in the slightest and needs a full revision to be even close to grammatically correct in some portions. The character design is the most flagrant of issues in this fanfiction, with all of the characters not acting even remotely how they would in the Type/Moon universe. to be honest this feels more like a Greece mythology fanfiction than a Fate one; other than some basic characters added in, nothing lines up with the Type/Moon universe.
there's some transition problem on chapter 20-ish but fixed on chapter 27. it's a really good nasuverse fic, I definitely recommend if your looking for something entertaining
There are many problems within this FF. One of which being the grammatical issues which are quite bad. But putting that aside, by the second volume the main character's personality has completely changed. The readers do not get a proper explanation within the story as to why his personality which is a 'hero' has changed into such a rule stricken character. Even within the second chapter of the second volume, the main character makes a contract with some entity which I assume is Alaya or Gaia but he is not rule bound in any type (though I may be wrong in this aspect). The only explanation aside from the actual story is the author asking the readers if the main character's personality should be changed within an Author's Note (which I find very hard to understand why you would change the personality so late without an explanation given within the story). Anyways, even after that, the main character insists on following the rules of a ruler-class which is 'Do not interfere with the Holy Grail War' (Why? You are a ruler-class without the restrictions of a ruler-class yet you insist on being a ruler-class???). The personality change could be explained as 'Time flows differently and therefore his personality changed. But even then, we do not know how much 'time' has passed, it could only be a day after his final battle in the first volume, a week, or even a year. We simply do not know. There is another review aside from mine which explains the issues within this FF, the other 2-star review. Anyways, Author, if you can, please rewrite or edit previous chapters to make it more coherent. (I do not mean to be negative or push people down when writing this review, I truly want a better story for all people to enjoy. thank you for reading this review.)
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For the review, it's decent so far but spelling/grammar could be better. There are also some paragraphs which are reapeated. For the plot, it follows other cn typemoon greece ff's, girl hephaestus, mc a student of chiron so and so forth. Also what's the raw name of the fic???
Good! Must try at least!! i hope he become a Heroic Spirit, since i love a Fate Fan fic that make the MC a Heroic Spirit