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Zusammenfassung
A 16-year-old boy, Roland Moris suddenly woke up in an unfamiliar place looking like Zhongli of Genshin Impact. At first, he thought he was in Genshin Impact and despaired thinking about all the Gods and monsters. However, he was soon proven wrong by the sight of a shiny Magikarp drowning in the lake.
This situation made him realized that he wasn't in Genshin Impact but in Pokemon!!
Come follow Roland's journey in this vast world filled with wonderful Pokemon.
Will he reach the top and catch this favourite Pokemon that he always wanted?
Read to find out!
Now, he won't catch real Legendaries not the likes of Dialga and Palkia at least. But, Mythicals are open game and he will catch the ones he can.
Harem?
Well I plan to make it, but the members aren't decided yet. You can suggest names however the girls must be proper adults (18+)
As for Pokemon moves?
This fic is based on the anime so there is no 4 moves limitation.
Well, that's all there is to it. For more details, read the damn thing!
Now the main topic, this is wish-fullfilment, there is not proper undate shedule. Also, don't expect regular updates I'll post when I can. This is my hobby not a job and if you want me to get more serious then support me. My paypal link is down below:
paypal.me/pratik359
There is also a DxD fic I'm writing you can read that too.
Join my discord if you wanna talk: https://discord.gg/hpe4SqYZKv
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great potential so far very enjoyable reed I'd recommended for anyone who enjoys reading Pokemon fanfiction enjoyable battles not relying on plot armour to beat people
Self insert is always about wish fulfilling, the problem is how in this case the author just put non credible coincidence, wild bulbasaur being found 1 day after the mc start his journey. Not to mention the shiny magicarp caught in the first chapter or how every pokemon he wants is hight potential. Overall is a bad quality fanfiction.
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its good and all but I have one problem I have been reading a older pokemon FF again and I noticed that there are alot of similarities between the two such as the pokemon at the start both a bulbasaur and shiny magicarp the only difference is he doesn't have a chimchar.Two the exact same scenario happens with officer Jenny again it could be a coincidence alot of things are different it's just I felt that these specific thing were to close it cloud be it was made that way because it was a pretty simple interaction and both pokemon are popular I just don't like people stealing other peoples things
I read all 6 chapters and my opinion of it is it's one of the best pokemon fics on this website not kidding to me it can rival pokemon aura of darkness and pokemon a new journey I really like this and I hope you don't drop and as for the harem you said 18+ correct? so basically no misty dawn may and all that jass so for harem if possible it's up to you I don't but can you add leaf and yellow if possible because those girls are 15 to 16 in the pokemon Manga and I don't want go and say add Cynthia and Sabrina I mean I like them but they're in their mid twenties so I wanna be reasonable you don't have to but in my opinion add some characters from the games like Hilda rose leaf yellow but you don't have to if you don't wanna if you are OK with I suggest leaf and yellow because they're in the Kanto region but great story overall can't wait for more
is not bad..but boring as heck!? all is to easy for mc if he wants a pokemon next day will jump front of him with excellent condition . the oak just gave him pokemon only asking for a name! it seems the author knows the canon plot but not how the pokemon world works. If only anyone could go and ask for starters from oak !?!?!
I like the story also the system is good not this op. I also hope to see more updates in the future. postscript stupid word counter i hate it
Spoiler enthüllenVery good, need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
it as and ok start and good story development then again i only read 9 chapter. i think it could use more meta knowledge use in the story for example go back to record ho-ho fly over ash see if he left him a feather he didn't know and use the feather to get a legendary. for example wait for the mewtwo movie clone ho-ho or it's a legend that said that ho-ho feather can bring a pokemon from the dead like the eevee evolution trio that become legendary dogs. he could have a sylveon that die fighting or something gets revive becoming a new legend of a fairy dog with area heal that can even revive the recent dead pokemon and can beat any dragon it faces.
Writing Quality:- Excellent but there are one or two spelling errors which doesn't matter. Story Development:- Light hearted story based on anime. It's great because most pokemon fics always shows the cruelty of the pokemon world or mc with Ash's intelligence. Character Design:- Like anime. Updating Stability:- Hope you upload chapters more frequently. World Background:- Pokemon anime.
Autor TheMilflover
This story has a lot of potenetial but please just don't drop it like other writers i wanna see what happens next and please update story regularly